我的兄弟英语作文五年级【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
我的兄弟英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我的兄弟英语作文五年级【三】
怀着一份火一般的热情，怀着一份淡淡的忧伤，我目睹了一位英雄的成长历程。顺溜——一位平凡而伟大的英雄，他的经历，认同一根针深深地刺进我内心深处。
云雾缭绕的山间，一声枪响惊醒无数飞鸟，也拉开了故事的序幕。司令员陈大雷和神枪手顺溜，从相识到相知，他们经历了无数磨难，跨过了无数坎坷。顺溜是故事的主人公，他是一位朴实可爱的新四军战士，自小便练得一身好枪法。投身革命后，在艰苦的抗日战争中，他更是凭着一手好枪法纵横沙场，敌无数。再一次又一艰苦的次训练下，顺溜从一个倔强稚气的小兵，一步一步，成长为一位英雄。
作为一名战士，必须经历千锤百炼才能成为英雄。的确如此。顺溜的一生充满着挑战与考验。他的身旁，倒下了一位位战友，一位位亲人：三营长，老排长……他们的给了顺溜一份份感悟与坚强。然而，一次特殊的任务却彻底改变了顺溜的一生。在奉命伏击华东日军军区司令石原的过程中，他亲眼目睹了自己的一家人惨遭日军迫害，但他仍然想石头一般卧伏在草丛中。这一张坚强的脸背后，蕴含的悲痛使我们永远无法想象的。
报仇！是啊，经历了如此的伤痛，又有谁不会怀着满腔怒火？于是，顺溜走上了报仇的道路。经历了千辛万苦，他终于来到了南湾码头——日军投降后回日本的码头。他登上了水塔，看到了那张熟悉的面孔。他的狙击枪时刻瞄准着那个日军，那个与他有着海深仇的鬼子。只要枪声一响，仇便能报。然而，他哭了，他的内心在经历着我们常人永远无法想象的痛苦挣扎。一面是国共相持的对峙局面，是内战一触即发的危机，一面是深仇大恨，让他如何抉择？枪声响了，一面面太阳旗飘落海中，可他就是没有射出那颗复仇的子弹，也永远不会开出那一枪。枪林弹雨中，他坦然地放下了手中的枪，就像一位英雄放下了他永远无法释怀的仇恨。最终，在国民军的狂轰乱扎中，水塔塌陷了，一位英雄的一生就这样悲壮地终结。那一刻，我看到的是一个伟大的灵魂在朝所有人微笑，笑得那么纯朴，那样憨厚。
顺溜，短暂的一生，却完成了从平凡到伟大的蜕变，从一次次磨难中。我想在顺溜放下枪的那一瞬间，他就注定成为一名英雄，不仅因为他的丰功伟绩，更因为他在生命的最后一刻完成了一次思想的飞跃，一次理性的升华，这就是英雄，在磨难中磨砺出的英雄。
回顾顺溜的一生，时起时落，或喜或悲，对我们未尝不是一种启发。人的一生短暂而又漫长，在匆匆流过的岁月里，如何让我们的人生有价值，有意义？或许不同的人对于人生价值有着不同的诠释，但我认为充实就是人生最基本的准则。做好每一件自己该做的事，这就够了。人生本就是一条路，只有平稳地走好每一步，才能快过坎坷，实现人生的价值。而人生更像一条帆船，航行在苍茫的大海上。多少人在追求着不切实际的梦，祈祷着大风大浪的来临，因为往往有极少数的人在风浪后能侥幸得到令人发狂的宝藏。但他们殊不知，又有多少人在风暴中沉默，匿迹。只有在平静的海面上前行的人，才能到达最终的“圣地”。正如顺溜，他没有做什么轰轰烈烈的大事，只是忠实的履行每一项任务，于是，他便成了英雄。
一部电视剧，演绎着震撼人心的故事，一个人物，展示着非凡的经历与体验，我在思考，什么是人生的价值。
我的兄弟英语作文五年级【四】
今日得空，观完《顺溜》的大结局，心中小感借笔墨抒发一下。
——题记
《顺溜》的故事从开端就比其他的战争片要略感轻松，虽然很多战争地方也很沉闷，紧张。可是《顺溜》里面的对话很为可爱，许多地方甚至让人不由捧腹，“赤狐”与“赤兔”这二者之间就引得我笑了好几次。
“军人”这两个字写起来不过八画，可是如果真正的把这两字用实际行动做好，可就不是一般人可以轻易做到的，即使做到了也需要很长的时间，一年？两年？五年？八年？十年？······甚至一辈子！
我相信顺溜是一个真正的军人，最后的片断中记录的不是一个人的思想斗争，是一个军人在亲人，纪律，情谊之间的抉择。是逞一时之快了坂田，还是忍辱负重继续做自己的“军人”职责。两难，甚至多难，人的一生就为一个“情”字，人要谨记对自己有恩的人，更何况是自己至亲至爱的亲人呢？最后顺溜选择让坂田背负罪孽在日本帝国的屠刀下，而顺溜呢？以一个军人，乃至是英雄的姿态倒下，当手榴弹引爆之时，当顺溜倒下之时，我相信他是快乐的，因为司令陈大雷是这样说的，因为至少他解脱了，挥别了心爱的阻击枪，却举高了一个军人的尊严，降低了一个弟弟的沉痛，告别了一个满是心酸，后悔，罪恶的世界。战争结束了！战争开始了！
中国，一个带着沉痛的国家，一个拥有未来的国家，一个孕育英雄的国家！
片尾时再次响起的“检讨”映照了顺溜的改变，显示了一个孩子蜕变为一位受人尊重的英雄的，人就是一辈子无论何时当你一但做下了决定就注定无法改变，注定要接受一切的安排。顺溜选择了军人这条道路，就选择了完全恪守军人的纪律，就选择了枪林弹雨。不容改变，不可改变。
我想最后的结局应该是最好的了。亦或有些人认为顺溜不用最好不要，他是个神枪手！他很伟大！没有的必要！可是如果顺溜没有，他该如何面对自己残余的人生？日本人在自己的面前了姐姐与姐夫这样伤痛的回忆他该如何面对，回忆是一把刀，一把割的人遍体鳞伤也不停息的刀！！！
如今我也做了我人生的重大决定，我不后悔我也不会后悔，生命是一个过程当这个过程结束了之后，我们才会深彻的悔悟，可那时已经太晚了。明天我会是怎样我不知道，谁都不知道。所以只能小心的度过每一天安静的度过每一天才行啊！
明天会是美好的一天，至少我坚信！
我的兄弟英语作文五年级【五】
故事讲了抗日战争时期新四军疯狂作战的故事，而主人翁顺溜则被刻画为一位新四军的战斗英雄，在抗日战争中立下了赫赫战功。他一个人打了一百多个鬼子，打了日本将军石原，是真正的抗战英雄。
作为军人他不断追求武器的完美，狙击枪配上消音器那是他的宝贝，甚至比他的生命还重要；他是不易屈服的新四军战士，即使在训练场上面对有着熟练技巧的三营长也从不畏惧，即使每次出手都被击败，他也绝不服输；可是他却一定会服从命令听指挥，认真完成训练任务。
他生性野蛮，是喝着牛羊奶长大的，他的姐姐好几次都误以为他了，可是他却靠着他顽强的生命力硬是每次都挺了过来。为了姐姐他不惜跑去与一分区民兵排长打架，为此受到处分，被撤销排长职务，可他却只对司令员说：“他只会当兵，不会当排长，一个真正的好兵在战场上能拼尽最后一颗子弹，拼尽最后一滴。”
顺溜一心想学习写字，在文书的指导下他知道了什么叫“思想觉悟，流寇残余”并虚心的认识到自己的错误，写出了深刻的检讨。
还依稀记得他被小王记者采访时的局面，由于他的实事求是的精神更加突显了他倔强诚实的品格。在击毙是石原过程中，他的心情不是一般人能体会的，他既背负着姐姐，姐夫的仇与恨，还要考虑到一名军人所要遵守的纪律，更有一名狙击手的重大责任，他不惜忍下一切保证完成任务，体现出了他的英雄本色。
最后，在高塔之上，他完全可以击败坂田，击败任何一个他想击败的人，可他最终没有，那是一名战士的纪律性。最后一次吃肚包鸡的沉默表现了他抱有的必决心，他是所有新四军的好兄弟，他叫顺溜。
看完这部电视剧后，我觉得王宝强演得真好，与他演的其他电视剧同样精彩。我认为他成功了，他有一个成功的人生，因为他找到了适宜自己人生，也许他没有太高的文凭，但他至少是勤勤恳恳的，他曾去清华大学演讲，许多人都说他自取其辱，但他有他自己的闪光点。
在看完这部电视剧后我觉得今后我们应该向顺溜那样对待亲人，我们要努力的给家人带来幸福，做人要诚实，要勤劳，要做好自己该做的事。
虽然现代社会不需要用武力来解决问题，但并不是在战场上才能体现出顺溜那样的爱国之心，生活在当代的我们同样应该为维护和平构建和谐社会而顽强拼搏，想要成功就要时刻准备着。
我们要永远记住我们想要的，而不是自己恐惧的。心如平原，跑马易放难收，时刻保持平常心态，准备迎战。
人的一生不是靠自己疯狂地打拼就能随随便便成功的，当然也要靠机会，就像王宝强，张国强一样，他们的成功也需要好的机会来拼凑，所以我们要学会尝试，勇敢的去争取。
王宝强做客艺术人生，讲到自己小时候的生活非常困窘，跟着母亲种田，很辛苦，而坚强倔强的他，练就了一身武艺，凭着自己顽强的拼搏精神，最终获得了成功。同样，他也是真正的英雄，是我们心中学习的榜样。
