高考英语作文评语简短大全(高中英语作文评语集锦)

高考英语作文评语简短大全(高中英语作文评语集锦)

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高考英语作文评语简短大全(高中英语作文评语集锦)

高考英语作文评语简短大全【一】

本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

高考英语作文评语简短大全【二】

(1可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;

(2词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数 。

High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.

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高考英语作文评语简短大全【三】

Today,early in the morning,when I woke up,I found it was later for half an hour than I usually did.Then I remembered that I didn’t set up the morning call last night.So I just grabbed some bread and rushed to the bus station.The bus seemed always not appearing when I needed it.Finally,I took on a bus,then I felt so relieved,because I wouldn’t be late for school.Suddenly,the bus stopped and the driver told us to change another bus,because there was something wrong with the wheels.I was so worried.When I arrived school,I was late.It was such a bad day for me.

这天早上我醒来的时候我发现我比平时晚了半个小时起床,我才想起我昨晚没有调闹钟。因此我拿了点面包就冲到公共汽车站。公共汽车似乎总是在我需要的时候却不出现。最后,我坐上了公共汽车。我最后放松了,因为不会迟到了。但是车突然就停了,司机叫我们换车,因为车轮出故障了。我很焦急,等我到学校时,我已经迟到了。这对我来说真是糟糕的一天啊。

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