要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
他就是老班长,他受上级委托来照顾三位病号。他用自己制作的鱼钩每天给病号们钓鱼吃,供给他们的营养,而自己却瘦得皮包骨头。后来的一天一夜,病号们越来越虚弱,连路都走不动了。在快要走出草地的'那天,老班长为了给病号们钓鱼吃,自己晕倒路旁,在醒来的刹那,他还没有忘记党,让我们快走,自责自己没有完成上级交给的任务。
他的舍己为人,令人敬佩。他为党献出了自己宝贵的生命。他用过的鱼竿将永远存放在纪念馆里,让子子孙孙都来瞻仰他,让他的事迹和精神永远铭记在人们心中。
他可以说比伟人更伟大,因为伟人只是献出除生命的全部,而他献出的是生命。
他在临前第一个想到的却是党和人民,在活着时,他第一个想到的仍是党和人民,他把自己的一生贡献给了党,自己却丝毫不留。
老班长您终于党、终于人民,舍己为人、舍生忘的精神,将永远铭刻人心,将永远成为我们学习的榜样。老班长,我们想念您!
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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