英文作文评分细化英文标准【一】
In last summer vacation ,I went to Beijing with my family. First ,we went to the Great Wall,where we met a lot of foreigners and we also took a lot of photos. They all like our culture and beautiful senery. Second.we went to the summer palace ,where the previous emporers spent summer in the old days.Third, we went to the Forbidden City .Finally ,we went to Wangfujing Street where we tasted much delicious food.
In a word, we had a great time during the vacation and we leanred a lot from this tour.
英文作文评分细化英文标准【二】
At noon, grandpa excitedly ran up and told us to go to paradise. I shout of surprise. At noon we eat wonton, even wrapped the wonton to my package so fast so good. I quickly solved the wonton, tidy up the things ready to go.
I can't help but admire the tiangong estate, wow, what a big ah, how beautiful! Grandpa bought the ticket, I rushed into the door, asked grandpa go to play there. Grandpa said: "first pick mulberry notes." Once again I screamed and ran to the mulberry fruit wood, I one side, while eating, admiring: how sweet! Suddenly, I found a big black mulberry notes, busy picking in the past, but I accidentally to crush it, make it out of the juice, juice flowing really - phase bleeding on the hand! Before I went to the mother call: "mama I 'blood'!" Mother a look, cut, turns out to be of mulberry fruit juice.
Finished picking mulberry notes, we went to the paradise of the plant world, "I looked at several galleries in a row, a tropical fruit zone, tropical zone, psammophyte area... And so on. There are all kinds of plants, fruit, let I pick up my free time should be no. Introduce several kinds of give you! Such as there is a "heart" you haven't seen! He is a tropical fruit, fruit is round, like the heart, leaves the same as ordinary camphor tree leaves.
Then we went to the amusement park, play the pedal boat and "space walk". We can play fun! Arrived there after I have a little linger the round-trip!
Today this manor trip of a day, let I grew many knowledge, you also go to some tourist attractions to play more! I have been to many places!
英文作文评分细化英文标准【三】
In recent years, tourism has been popular and played an important role in our nation’s economic growth. However, I am afraid that if tourism develops over, it will bring harm to the environment and give rise to many problems.
There are a few reasons accounting for my views and I would like to list three of them. One of the examples is that a large number of woods and other plants were replaced by all kinds of accommodation facilities or scenic spots. That definitely breaks the ecological balance of these areas and destroys the natural beauty of the scenic spots. Worse still, more pressure has been placed environment protection in that many tourists left their garbage in the scenic spots. In addition, over-developed tourism will occupy large numbers of farmland and lead to the shortage of the land.
In a word, tourism will be harmful to our environment if it is over development. Thus, I do not advocate that we development tourism without considering the environment. And we should keep the balance between tourism development and environment protection so that we can achieve the sustainable development between our nation’s economy and the environment.
英文作文评分细化英文标准【四】
A Trip I Will Never Forget
Last year, I went to Guang Zhou in the summer vacation. I felt so excited, it took me about four hours to get there. In the daytime, the air was so stuffy and the sun was so hot, so my friends and I decided to take a rest in the hotel. When the sun almost got down, we started to go on the street, the first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks, we had no idea which to eat, so we planed to eat as much as we could. I found myself couldn’t stop eating, the food was tasted. After we finishing eating, we started to go shopping.Guang Zhou is famous for the foreign trade, its clothes are fashionable and cheap. We went to the shopping street, trying on all kinds of clothes, at last, we bought many clothes. This trip is so unforgettable to me.
去年暑假，我去广州旅游。我感到很兴奋，我花了大约四个小时到那里。白天，空气很闷，太阳很大，所以我的朋友和我决定去旅馆休息。当太阳将要下山了，我们开始逛街，第一件事就是找东西吃。街上有很多美味的小吃，我们不知道吃什么好，因此我们计划尽可能多吃。我无法停止下来，食物太美味了。吃完以后，我们开始购物，广州的外贸很出名，衣服时尚，价格便宜。我们去了购物街，试了各种各样的衣服，最后，我们买了很多衣服。这趟旅程对我来说是很难忘的。
英文作文评分细化英文标准【五】
r vacationmy family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh airwhich made us so comfortable.We went to the seasidethe sea was as blue as the skyand bathing in the sunshine on the beach was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirsI was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings theresuch as fishprawnand so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hoteland the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very muchand if I got a chanceI hope to come here againit is such a beautiful and interesting place.
英文作文评分细化英文标准【六】
Dear Headmaster,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
Li Hua
尊敬的校长，
我写信告诉你关于学校是否应该组织一次春季郊游的讨论。
对问题的看法有如下：70%的学生认为学校应该组织“春季郊游”。他们认为，春季郊游可以使他们享受大自然的美丽的风景，它可以扩大我们的视野，使我们更多的.知识。他们还说，在空旷的田野的空气很清新。更新鲜的空气对我们的健康有很大的健康。
另一方面，30%不喜欢外出郊游的想法。在他们的观点中，时间是非常宝贵的，所以他们要抓紧每一分的努力，在他们的课程中努力学习。旅游成本很多。在这种情况下，它会增加他们家庭的负担。首先，没有人能确保每个学生的安全。
你真正的
李华
英文作文评分细化英文标准【七】
I went to Yunnan Province with my sister to enjoy my summer vacation. During the five-day trip, we visited many famous sites of interest in this province. Among them, Stone Forest in Lunan Yi Nationality Autonomous County leaves a deepest inpression upon me for its strange, steep yet magnificent landscape. Indeed, both my sister and I had such a good time in this tour that we could not help but plan our trip to this province for another time the moment we arrived at home!
