主题句:Without hesitation, _____. It wasn't long before _____.
扩展句:1、One ______.
2、Another _______.
3、Our teacher _______.
1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n..
About nine O'clock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.
Without hesitation, I dialed "120". It wasn't long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
Is he a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we did't retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因+经过+结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
阅读下面两首诗,根据提示,完成赏析。(6分
薛宝钗咏白海棠 林黛玉咏白海棠
珍熏芳姿昼掩门,自携手瓮灌苔盆。 半卷湘帘半掩门,碾冰为土玉为盆.
胭脂洗出秋阶影,冰雪招采露砌魂。 偷来梨蕊三分白,借得梅花一缕魂.
淡极始知花更艳,愁多焉得玉无痕。 月窟仙人缝缟袂,秋闺怨女拭啼痕.
欲偿白帝凭清洁,不语婷婷日又昏。 娇羞默默同谁诉,倦倚西风夜已昏.
(据人民文学出版杜1996年12月第2版《红楼梦》第三十七回
咏物诗讲究形神兼备。以上两诗,颔联都着眼于白海棠之“白”,但绘形写神各有不同。
“胭脂洗出秋阶影,冰雪招来露砌魂”一联,前句以洗尽胭脂,极言其自然本色之美,后句以晶莹剔透的冰雪,喻其冰消玉洁之魂。倒装句式的运用,显得新颖别致: “洗”“招’二字,运用拟人手法,生动地传达出白海棠的情韵神态;而“秋阶”“露砌”的映衬,更是意味深长。诗人含蓄地表现了白海棠朴素淡雅、清洁自励的品性。
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