2020长沙中考作文英语(2024长沙中考英语作文评分细则)

2020长沙中考作文英语(2024长沙中考英语作文评分细则)

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2020长沙中考作文英语(2024长沙中考英语作文评分细则)

2020长沙中考作文英语【一】

早早地起床,坐上欢乐的大巴车,一路汽车疾驰,一路欢歌笑语,我们终于来到了—长沙生态动物园。

下了大巴车,我们又坐着园林里的观光车一路玩赏着;我们看见了在草坪上晒太阳的老虎,看见了在吃草的马,看见了在喝水的鸵鸟,看见了在吃叶子的长颈鹿,看见了在玩耍的斑马……。这些动物趣味益然,其中让我感觉到最可爱的是小黑熊,我们坐在车里心里头兴奋得不得了,迫不及待想要与憨厚的黑熊近距离合影,那只小黑熊看见我们都在跟它热情地打招呼,似乎也感染了我们的喜悦。竟然“砰”地一下摇摆着站了起来,像是在热切地欢迎我们的到来。小黑熊笨拙的动作使我们更加乐不可支了,我情不自禁赶紧拿出手机,把小黑熊摇摆着的肥胖身子完美地拍了下来。

接下来,我们来到的是森林剧场。首先出场的是一队活蹦乱跳的小猴子,它们骑着小单车在场上转来转去。穿紫色衣服的小猴子可乖了,骑单车时从没有下来过一次,而穿红色衣服的小猴子则显得淘气多了,只见它用手扶着单车,双脚就在地上胡乱地走仿佛在跳踢踏舞一样。逗得让我们哈哈大笑。接下来出场的就是森林剧场中的前辈—老山羊爷爷了,老山羊爷爷为我们表演走细钢丝。山羊爷爷身上还背着一只小猴子,当老山羊爷爷走细钢丝时,身上的小猴子紧紧地抓住老山羊爷爷的背,生怕自己一不小心会被摔下来,我想:真是一只名副其实胆小猴啊!老山羊爷爷那胸有成竹稳操胜券的样子,你害怕什么啊!

老山羊爷爷表演完后,就是小黑熊的表演了,让我印象最深的是小黑熊在双杠上打前滚翻。压轴表演的是百兽之王——-老虎。老虎跨越火圈,那更是人人称赞、个个叫好。

看完了森林剧场的精彩表演后,我们又去看了大象表演、熊猫馆……

我们玩得真开心,不仅看到了各种各样的动物表演,还收获了许多课外知识。

2020长沙中考作文英语【二】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

2020长沙中考作文英语【三】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

2020长沙中考作文英语【四】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成\"总—分—总\"结构

2020长沙中考作文英语【五】

早上,我还在温暖的被窝中埋头睡着觉,手机铃声不停地响着。我猛的想起今天要去长沙旅游,就一骨碌爬起来,迅速穿好衣服洗漱完毕,匆忙吃过早饭就上路了。

到了学校,老师和同学都到齐了。陡然听到汽车的一声长鸣,我因为等待而烦操的心忽而轻松了。我们蜂拥的迎上去,在老师的安排下我们找到自己的座位坐下。一路上,高速公路的两旁那些清翠的小山向后飞奔着,紧接着迎来了一栋栋高楼大厦让我看得眼花缭乱,不知不觉到了长沙。下了车,迎面就吹来一股清凉而又舒适的风,同车上比起来真是天壤之别。我们排成整齐的路对向动物园“进军”。一会,我们就到达了动物园大门前,“还没进动物园就已经见到大象了”我欢呼的叫着。我走过前去,仔细一看,原来是用蜡制成的,一种用蓝色和淡绿色相杂的皮肤不仔细看还真有可能让人信以为真。我用手在皮肤上摸着,那皮肤十分粗糙,担又给人一种柔软的感觉。终于,进了门,里面又是另翻洞天。我们徒步前走,这儿的风景美极了,四周都是青山,那青山十分的绿,看,在青山的绿影下溪水、石头、沉在水中的叶子都披着绿色的霞光,就连人们身上鲜艳的五彩的衣服也被染绿了。在绿影中,一些枫树十分养眼,那红光令人感到温暖,这红光似乎有一种引力一样,我不时总扭过头去看看,这枫树似乎成了宠儿。我们一路上有说有笑的走着,听说有大象表演我们班的同学都不顾一切的狂奔了过去。我们找到了一个座位坐下了,大象在驯兽师的命令下作出了一系列动作,看大象将两只前脚抬起,站立在约莫三四十厘米的木桥上,还左右的行走着。还有,它们两只一起,每一只的腿都抬起来一条,两只象抬起的脚碰到一起,将驯兽师抬在上面……我们的欢呼声十分响亮,但我转念一想:大象的表演的确精彩,但是,它们因为这次表演肯定十分辛苦,而且,我们不能因为为了满足自己的而将动物的自由剥削掉!

通过这次的旅游我明白了这样一个道理:只有和动物和平共处,才是不让人类更早灭绝的明确选择!

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