英语作文学生自评互评(学生英语作文评语简短)

英语作文学生自评互评(学生英语作文评语简短)

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英语作文学生自评互评(学生英语作文评语简短)

英语作文学生自评互评【一】

敬爱的老师:

您好!

老师,您曾在那神圣的七尺讲台,洒下您的汗水滴滴;老师,您曾亲切的教育我们;老师,您曾送过多少界届毕业班啊!老师,您把您的一生都用在学生身上,您就像一只蜡烛一样,永不停息的绽放着光和热;老师……

老师,在您接这个班以前,说实话,我的作文并不是很好,可是就是您的一句话,改变了我对作文无趣的想法:

您说过:“作文一定要真,真的事情就是从生活中积累来的。”从此,我便观察起生活,我发现了生活其实也很有趣。比如,听完同学讲的一个小笑话后有什么想法;逛街时看见有人买衣服在讲价;考试前后的心情。还有我不停的看作文书,有时觉得看没有读记得快,便一个人躲在厕所高声朗读。再加上我学了一年的作文,作文水平有了明显的提高。老师,我的点滴进步也有您的一份功劳,是您为我打下了一定的基础。

老师,9月10日那天,有好多同学都送了礼物表示感谢,我却没有送,那是因为我知道您不是希望每年都得到学生的礼物,而是每年都希望得到学生最好的成绩,因为那是学生的改变,也是对您工作的肯定。

老师,您的爱,像一股暖流,永远温暖着学生的心;老师,您的爱,又像一把熊熊燃烧的火焰,照亮我学习的前程,我将终生难忘!

老师,您辛苦了!

祝:

一帆风顺工作顺利!

XXX

20xx年XX月XX日

英语作文学生自评互评【二】

"Open the window! Let the free air come back! Let's breath the breath of heroes." This is a line from romain rolland's book, "celebrity biography". Perhaps this is his interpretation of all his work.

The author of "celebrity biography" is French thinker and writer, romain rolland. "Celebrity biography is about Beethoven, Michelangelo and Tolstoy in grief stuck on the journey of life, to seek the truth and justice, for can show the true, the good and the beautiful immortal masterpieces, laid down their lives. They may be tortured by sickness, or by the misery of their sufferings, or by the confusion of their hearts, or the three of them, which are all overlapping in one body, with deep anguish, almost suffocating their breath, and destroying reason. But with strong will, they walked through the glorious and arduous life.

There are 5 famous biographies of famous people

Many places in "celebrity biography" are amazing, but my most memorable one is Beethoven's saying, "man, depend on yourself!" This sentence seems to be the advice to every living thing, if not to be self-reliant, then to ask for trouble. These three great men, on their own, forged a glorious life.

Beethoven came from a poor family, dropped out of school at thirteen, started the whole family at the age of seventeen, and when he was twenty-five years old, he had just emerged from the music scene and was deaf again. The pain of this very deadly disease to the musician, who could have imagined who could think of his immortal masterpiece, was written in the vast majority of his deafness. He had always been unlucky in life, and his love life was full of desolation and regret, due to poverty and disability.

Meters open the ROM and Tolstoy luckier than Beethoven, they don't have any physical disability, but they refuse to enjoying life, will not live in vain, for the own goal, fighting.

What kind of victory could be compared to their achievements that the glory of the sun that was the day of the Napoleonic wars was never won by spiritual power. They forged themselves with difficulty. As Beethoven summed up his life in one sentence, this sentence has become the motto of the brave man: "for its pain, there is joy."

英语作文学生自评互评【三】

Everyone has a familiar place in his life, such as parks, supermarkets, and their own rooms. Of all, my most familiar is my room.

The door is west, and there are two windows on both sides of the door. They are "North Window" and "south window". Opposite the doorway is a small balcony, there is a small wardrobe in the balcony, with my clothes when I was a child. My bed is toward the south window, the bed is neatly placed with pillows and quilts. My computer desk faces the North window. There is a regular computer on the computer desk. As soon as I got into the room, I saw my favorite, the computer, and an eye light. Northeast corner is an unusual desk. There are many books on the table. There are dictionaries, books borrowed in the library, encyclopedia books bought by ourselves, and snacks: egg rolls, candy, and my favorite large bottle of coke. The southeastern corner is my wardrobe, with school uniforms, clothes, socks and underpants in the wardrobe. Also with bed sheets, quilt towel. There was an almost useless old TV on the cupboard. There is a DVD player on the TV. In the southwest, it's a big wardrobe for mom and dad. Beside the wardrobe, it was a dresser. I had a photo of my childhood on the platform. It was very lovely.

This is my room, is it beautiful? You are welcome to visit my colorful room.

英语作文学生自评互评【四】

"Celebrity biography" perfectly confirms the old adage of Chinese people: the people of ancient and modern times are not only talented but also resilient. Romain rolland holds the three artists in their respective fields together to restore the high morality of 20th century literature and restore its colorful character. Beethoven from flash light to enjoy the reputation of the peak to the bottom of your life, poor tragic from childhood to old age in the pursuit of happiness the twists and turns of life, just as the Roman. Roland described as "his whole life was like a thunderstorm day". From it, I realized that Beethoven has always been in the struggle against the fate, and ideological struggle, even though he gives a person a sense of pride, but his heart a fragile, a strong, are people who do not know him unable to dig. The passion for creating the perfect song, the dedication to seeking joy, and the perfect encounter, made his life become a force of nature. A primitive force between the rest of the ingredients of that kind of engagement with nature, the Homer epic spectacle ", he in his own misery in casting, joy "with joy" pain is sufficient to enrich his life. Michelangelo was not "he is powerful, he was born to fight, to conquer, and he conquered -- he did not win." That's not what he's looking for." He was a spiritual aristocrat, a genius, but he was troubled by genius, and his spirit and soul were powerless. This crazy spark exists in an overly effeminate body and mind that cannot control its terrible life. From this I can see that his life is a sacred pain

As long as we understand the "celebrity biography to our high sublimation, and make the hero of the blood is in front of us at the moment, the hero of the red flag flutters on our heads, we will feel slowly, in the people from the sublime, farewell, lofty and the mediocre society, our soul has also been sublimed as a.

英语作文学生自评互评【五】

Open the biography of the famous, in the introduction of the first paragraph: "the air around us is heavy. The old man's Europa was unconscious in a climate of turbidity and corruption, and the vulgar materialism repressed the thought and obstructed the actions of the government and individuals. Society dies in a perverse, self-serving selfishness, and mankind breathes and breathes. Open the window! Let the free air come back! Breath the breath of heroes."

It is obvious that Roman Roland should use heroic spirit to correct the age bias. The real hero, the true greatness, is the pain and solitude, the struggle of the self with the invisible. In the same quote he added: "I am not a hero, I am a hero; And just by the great soul." He was the one who grasped the anguished mind of the hero and the great man, and took the triumph of overcoming adversity as a shining ruler of the hero. And his celebrity biography is revealed three suffering the heart of the hero biography in human history, they are great musician Beethoven, 19 th-century German Renaissance Italy famous sculptor Michelangelo, the Russian literary giant Leo Tolstoy.

"Resurrection" is another masterpiece, Tolstoy twilight Roman Roland said: "the wife, children, friends, and did not understand his enemy, all think that he is a Don Quixote, because they can't see him fight the enemy, in fact this is his own enemy."

"Tolstoy, do you live according to what you preach?" He answered painfully, "I am ashamed to die, I am a sinner, and I should be despised." Finally, at the age of 82, Tolstoy escaped from his home on a cold winter night and was ill in an unknown town. As he lay dying, he wailed and said to the people who were standing around him.

"Thousands of millions of lives are suffering; Why is everyone there taking care of Leo Tolstoy?"

In fact, Tolstoy's answer to the question of the living is also a response to the pain of the soul, where we have clearly heard Beethoven's joyful singing of life.

This is the eternal spirit of romance that romain rolland left us in the biography of the famous.

英语作文学生自评互评【六】

The biography of the famous is composed of the famous French writer romain rolland, the biography of Michelangelo and the biography of Tolstoy, all of which were created in the early twentieth century. These three are famous people all over the world, but they do not give in to their fate and fight against their fate.

The first was Beethoven, a German musician who was born poor and dropped out of school. His life was rough and he was brave to fight his fate. His only family had failed him, and he was badly hit, but he survived. The great musician wrote an immortal masterpiece after hearing the deaf. He conquered the disease and overcame the difficulty. Beethoven was successful because of his spirit, unwilling to yield to his fate, and his spiritual values.

The second was Michelangelo, an Italian composer. He was born to a richer family in Florence. He has a high culture and artistic foundation. He spent his life working for the church. And his family kept asking him for money, and Michelangelo never refused their demands. The Pope had erected a monument to himself, which made Michelangelo less than his ideal. He encountered many difficulties in his life. He insisted that he lived to be in his seventies for his own ideal. Only a man with dogged perseverance like Michelangelo will succeed.

The third is Leo Tolstoy, a Russian writer. Tolstoy was born with a silver spoon in his mouth. He has a happy family. He has a high literary talent. He had been successful before, but he didn't care about what he had. He would not enjoy life, he would not spend his life, he would like to reflect the value of his life through human beings. Tolstoy was one of those people who let us see the different sides of the writer, the kind of inner shock that made me feel a lot.

This book tells us to fight our fate bravely, as long as you don't give in to your destiny, one day you will change your fate. There is an old saying that "destiny is in your hands".

英语作文学生自评互评【七】

你喜欢吃桃子吗? 是的\',我喜欢. 你喜欢吃橘子吗? 不,我不喜欢

.你爱吃梨吗? 我非常喜欢吃梨.让我们一起分享桃子和梨吧.好的

英语作文学生自评互评【八】

This "celebrity biography" is about the tribulations and difficulties of the three famous men on the road to fame, from the power of persistence to the disintegration of power even to despair. They abandoned a lot of love and friendship on the way to fame. Finally, they set foot on the road to success.

The first is a belief that, suffering from pain, still does not put down music -- Beethoven. Although he was deaf, he said proudly, "listen to my heart music, you don't understand how I feel! A band can only play music that I expect to write in a minute!" Yeah! His music set of classicism is the beginning of romanticism, and its creation reflects the progressive thoughts of the rising period of the bourgeoisie.

Then a tragic, still sculptural belief - Michelangelo. His pain came from human malice. He was born to fight, to conquer! It is precisely because of this that his artistic creation has been deeply influenced, often with the realism of the civil class at the time of the patriotism and freedom of the struggle of the spirit of the painting. This kind of cup is presented in grand and magnificent form, and his hero is both an ideal symbol and a reflection of reality.

The last is a mirror that Lenin once called "the Russian revolution." Looking around Tolstoy's life, he was not only a literary giant, but also the narrative of life, religion, and society that made him a world-leading thinker. Tolstoy never laid down his obsession with the meaning of life.

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