初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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太阳公公要开派对,整个宇宙都热闹起来了。宇宙邮递员正忙着帮太阳公公发送派对邀请卡。当然了,宇宙的`所有行星、陨石等天际的星群都得了了邀请,大家都趁着这个机会联络一下彼此的感情。
馋嘴的冥王星第一个到场,它一进门,就东张西望找吃的,太阳公公看见了心想:“这个小馋嘴来了,今天的食物可就要糟殃了”。皎洁的月亮妹妹也来了,她永远都是那么高贵。太阳公公心想:“等会银河姑娘、晚霞姑娘来了可就热闹了,她们一定又要和月亮妹妹争芳斗艳了”。正在这时,典雅高贵的银河姑娘就到了。身着五彩衣的晚霞姑娘打扮得最耀眼了,就像个大牌明星。太阳公公自言自语道:“真是想曹操曹操到。”就在三位美眉各展风采时,客人们陆续都到齐了。
午夜十二点,派对正式开始了。星群们一个个都狂舞起来;素有绅士风度的天王星也欢跃起来了;最有趣的还要算银河姑娘了,她为了和月亮妹妹、彩霞姑娘争艳大跳舞;彩霞姑娘也不也不甘示弱,一曲接一曲地跳了下去;优美的音乐又响起了,银河姑娘拖着又长又亮的裙子在舞池里飞舞,大家被那优美的舞姿征服了。尤其是天王星,它在曲终后,单腿跪地,绅士般的说道:“亲爱的银河小姐,你的舞姿让我沉迷,你的美貌让我折服,请嫁给我吧!”银河姑娘看着天王星诚恳的样子,害羞地点了点头。太阳公公开心地笑了,它没想到派对竞成全了一对恋人。顿时所有星群为此而鼓起掌来,但有二个人没鼓掌,一个是彩霞姑娘,她正躲在一边妒忌银河姑娘;一个就是贪吃的冥王星,他正在狠命的贪吃的丰盛的晚宴。
宇宙里的星际们在狂欢,可人间就不好过了。由于月亮不在,人间黑漆漆的。可是善良的人们都没有抱怨,人们也在为天上的这次快乐聚会而高兴呢!觉得应该给月亮妹妹放了一天假。
第二天,太阳公公有气无力的从太阳宫出来,当它看到人间车水马龙的热闹情景时,顿时又精神饱满地工作起来了。
“生日快乐!”一群人围着一个蛋糕齐声喊道。哈!你一定猜到了吧!有人过生日了,那这次的小寿星又是谁?他是张宇。
急匆匆来到牛排馆,点了一份牛排就开始聊天。十分钟后,有人叫:“牛排来啦!”我听了猛一转头,牛排的香味真浓,我沉浸在牛排香里,一会儿后,便狼吞虎咽起来,嘴里的还没咽下,叉子上却早有一块肉了。
接下来,我们去了“小叮当乐园”。一进乐园,便开始了男女PK赛。 “看我方“飞炮”!”女生拿起海洋球对男生大打出手。“看我方“金华火腿肠”!”陈永晋拿着一个像香肠一样的东西攻了过来,“不好,撤退!”
不知何时,战斗场转移到了海洋球场,“啊!敢打我,看我怎么对付你!”我拿起好几个球,手做了个360度大转弯,“嗨!”顿时,球像雨点般落下来,碰在男生身上,哈,这可替我出了口气。
又过了一会,我们又变了场地,玩起了“捉捉”,啊!追上了,快跑!“加速”哈,追不上了吧!“喂!我们躲在这吧!”一层,二层,玩具屋里,海洋球场里,我们的身影无处不在。
半小时过去了,我们又玩起了“抢球”,男方左边,女方右边,这次是一可与陈听对战,一可快撑不住了,这时一可眼睛一亮,拼命地向陈听那边推,我叫道:“一可,你干什么?你这是把球拱手相让啊!”,只见这时陈听被推倒在地上,球顺着陈听身上溜了过去,这一局,女方胜,“耶”!
我们赢了!“看炮”“看我的飞毛腿”,“啊!好臭呀!我看你这是香港脚吧!其臭无比!”“哈哈哈?我看也是的,哈哈哈?”
8点半了,游乐园里依然有我们的笑声?
当然,哪个参加派对前会不化妆打扮一番,不过这会我们的化妆是重在手上——仔仔细细地用洗手液清洁双手,我们参加的派队的盛装则是戴上塑料圆帽,套上曳地围裙,想到这个“西式”派对即将举行,我觉得自己仿佛来到了欧洲……
来到面点房,一块块嫩白的小“雪团”端到了我的`眼前,毛师傅开口说:“我们先在面团中间叉几个小孔,以免比萨四溅出‘仓’哦!”话音刚落,我们就开始了“西餐活动”。
番茄酱这急性子,总是改不掉。刚叉完面团,它就叫道:“该我上场了,该我上场了!”我无可奈何,只好让它首先加入“比萨派队”。
此时,各个配料都活跃起来,争先恐后地要上场,我开了一个小后门,让全身裹着乳白色羊绒衣的奶酪先露脸,接着,我陆续让它们上场:害羞的香肠丁红着脸怯生生地登台,挺有身份的肉沫当然不甘落后,爱生气的玉米和热情的番茄携手亮相,压轴的是舞蹈家——洋葱,我把它们安在比萨中间,让它互相融合,尽情交谈,这些馅料朋友的到来,给比萨派对增添了许多风采。
比萨派对渐渐进入了高潮,房间里(烤箱里)的人气指数已经达到了几百度,比萨派队各个朋友的手此刻都已经紧紧地拉在了一起。
派队活动即将结束之时,交出了人人抢手的杰作——精美的比萨工艺品。它们的问世得到了师傅、老师、家长的一致肯定:“verygood!”
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
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