五年级英语外研版第一模块作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语外研版第一模块作文【二】
暑假天气炎热，我们来到了磐安，虽然比义乌凉快，但大太阳还是毫不留情的照射了下来。知了也拼命的叫着，“好热啊，好热啊。
外面这么热又不能出去玩，好无聊啊，这时爸爸提议：“我们和你的朋友去漂流吧。“好耶!好耶!我顿时高兴的手舞足蹈。
我们一行人坐着车，翻山越岭来到了龙溪漂流区，那里人来人往，好不热闹。山顶上的`云朵如同仙境一般，太阳照射在水面，像在和细细的波浪挑逗。水边，放着许多皮划艇，一旁古木苍天，树顶上晃晃悠悠的绿流了下来，像几条充满生机与希望的瀑布，一直流到石头缝里。
我们穿好了救生衣，坐着游览车，到了漂流的起点，这里有一条溪，一直往下流。我和爸爸和两个好朋友坐一条皮划艇，每条皮划艇配两支船桨。我们刚坐上皮划艇，就顺着水流开走了，没想到，一开始就有一条小水瀑。“唰——一下，我们差点飞出去，皮划艇把水花翻起，形成了一道水帘。“哗——水花过去后，我们已经全身湿了。稍稍平稳了以后，这时轮到我们用桨划了，我和爸爸划起了船，可船不是转圈就是歪歪扭扭的前进。
顺着水流的方向，我们的船向河流中间的几块石头冲去。不好，要撞上了，爸爸使劲调转方向，终于才没有被撞上石头。这时我们迎面而来的又是一条很陡的水瀑，我和同伴如同见了猫的老鼠，尖叫起来。这条水瀑大约有两米多高，我抓住一根竹子，想把船拉回来，可是来不及了，我们连同竹子一起冲了下去。更可怕的事情发生了，我们前面是一块巨石，我们又尖叫起来，但我们的船撞上了巨石爸爸的帽子，被这突如其来的撞击给震了下去，我们赶快划出这块岩石区域去抓爸爸的帽子，帽子却像个顽皮的小孩，忽上忽下，我们也不甘示弱，特别是爸爸生龙活虎，差点跳下水去抓帽子了。我们看见爸爸的帽子就在眼前了，我们几个小孩都伸手去抓都没抓到，最后还是爸爸用船桨把帽子给勾了回来。一路漂流下来，遇到了好多险境，都被我们一一化解。
最后我们是团队中第二个到达终点的，总路程3500米，我们用了近两个小时，这也是一个不错的成绩好了。第一次漂流的感受就是——刺激，特别刺激。
五年级英语外研版第一模块作文【三】
培养学生的创新精神是技术设计教学的重点。设计是技术的核心，技术设计也是培养中学生创新精神和创造能力的有效教学载体，是通用技术课程的一个闪光点。
教材中的技术设计内容是根据《通用技术课程标准》为高中学生精心编制的一般设计过程与方法。所以，在教学中要紧紧把握一般技术设计过程中的核心、关键和方法，积极组织学生全员性和全程性参与，让他们亲历设计方案的构思过程、方案转化为模型的过程、技术试验的过程、交流和评价过程等技术设计过程，并从中体验和领悟技术设计的本质。
改变“重视操作训练，轻视创新设计”的旧的技术教学观念，大力加强学生的设计活动。教师要采取有效的教学方法，诱导启发学生构思，启迪学生的发散性思维活动，鼓励大胆创新，指点学生从人、物和环境三个方面系统地进行设计分析，不断地促进构思的发展，形成多方案的设计思路，通过比较、权衡和决策，产生技术设计方案。
教学中特别要重视多方案的形成，它是衡量技术设计教学是否成功的一个重要标志，力求避免全班只形成千篇一律的结果。
五年级英语外研版第一模块作文【四】
技術试验在《通用技术课程标准》中占据了重要地位，这是因为它是一种重要的技术方法并具有巨大的教育价值。技术试验除了对技术活动本身具有不可缺少的重要价值外，还存在不可忽视的巨大教育价值。发掘技术试验活动的教育价值，是落实和实现通用技术中情感、态度和价值观目标的重要方面。
技术试验在教材中占有了相当重要的地位，教材中为此专门设置了“技术试验及其方法”一节和众多的“试验栏目”。通过学生经历这些试验活动，参与动手实践，培养他们的不断探究精神，体验解决技术问题的艰辛和感受获得成功的愉悦，养成百折不挠的意志和品质，培养实事求是、精益求精的态度。
在技术试验教学过程中，首先要激发学生对技术的好奇、爱好和追求，勇于不断提出“为什么”、“做什么”、“怎么做”，学生才能积极而主动地参与到技术试验活动中。要明确试验的目的和要求，了解试验的基本步骤，提醒学生在试验过程中要主动地进行观察。最后，要求学生以实事求是的态度写出简单的技术测试和技术试验报告。
在教学中，如何对待学生的试验失败、如何评价试验失败，成为教学中经常碰到的问题。要认识技术试验失败经常可能发生，引导学生认真分析试验中的失败原因，从中吸取教训，增长知识和技能，使其成为成功之母，并经历失败的磨练，培养良好的意志和品质。
五年级英语外研版第一模块作文【五】
记得是今年的春节，爸爸压皮儿，妈妈包。看着妈妈包的那一个个胖乎乎的饺子，我觉得挺好玩，不由得也拿起一张皮儿，准备包一个。
我用左手托着皮，右手夹上满满一筷子馅儿，放在皮儿中央，把饺子皮的两端往中间一合，使劲一捏，不料，馅儿像小虫一样从饺子皮侧面钻了出去。我一看，赶紧把馅儿堵住，可皮儿仍旧“张着大嘴”。弄了半天，皮儿就是合不拢“嘴”，我像泄了气的皮球，一屁股坐在沙发上。
妈妈看到我灰心丧气的样子，好像摸透我的心思，走过来，对我说：“是不是泄气了？”我不好意思地点了点头。“来，我教你！”说完，妈妈拿起饺子皮边包边给我讲，做完了，我明白多了，也有了信心，便振作起来。
我按照妈妈说的，拿起饺子皮，用筷子夹起些陷儿，小心地放再饺子皮上，学着妈妈的样子，把皮对折，上沿对齐，两手一挤，一只可爱的小饺子，就做好了。接下来，我又包好了许多个饺子。这时，爸爸说：“开始煮饺子啦！”说完，爸爸就把饺子放进锅里。
过了一会儿，饺子熟了，妈妈给我盛了一碗，我津津有味地吃着自己亲手包的饺子，我心里有一种说不出的高兴。此时，我真想告诉全世界的人，我是多么“伟大”啊！
其实，人生中的许多事都是这样。当你勇敢地跨出了最艰难的第一步，你就会有加倍的信心和勇气去应付更多的困难，也许这就是“天下事有难易乎？”的的道理吧！
五年级英语外研版第一模块作文【六】
今天就是除夕了，在我们这里有个习俗，除夕夜的时候要包饺子，初一早上的时候要吃除夕夜包的饺子。下午和妈妈一起去附近的集市上去买了饺子皮，准备晚上包饺子用的，然后看着妈妈和饺子馅，到了晚上吃完饭的时候我们就一家人坐在一起包明天吃的饺子。
看着妈妈包饺子好简单，然后就自己也想试试，心里想着这么简单我也会包，然后就学者妈妈的样子动手包了起来，但是我想的太简单了，我是学着妈妈的样子包的，结果包出来的饺子皮都捏不住，用力把饺子皮捏住了，可是饺子下边却裂破了，连着包了好几个都是这样，然后我就坐一边生闷气去了，妈妈看见了就耐心的给我说，包饺子的时候饺子馅不能放太多了，哟啊不然饺子皮会裂破的，饺子馅也不能放太少，要不然吃着不好吃，我听了之后按照妈妈的说法把饺子馅少放了点。果然饺子皮没有再裂破，可是我一看和妈妈包的饺子放在一起，我包的饺子好丑。然后我就继续问妈妈取经，妈妈就手把手的教我，慢慢的，我报的饺子果然越来越好看。不到一会会，饺子就包完了，妈妈夸我学的很快。
明天早上就能吃到我自己包的饺子了，原来享受自己的劳动成果是一件很快乐的事，以后我要多帮妈妈做家务。
