初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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上个星期五,张老师让我们当堂写第一单元的大作文,我不像别的同学一样,叫出了声,反而有些正常。因为暑假的时候,因为我作文一般,自己每天写日记,一个星期些、写一篇作文,这让我有些喜欢它。
老师讲解完,让我们开始自己写。当开始写时,我有一大堆问题涌上来,比如:是写童话吗?人物可以说话吗?······我写作通道如同下水道一样,堵牢了,水就下不去了。我很认真的构思,但还是写不出来,我的大脑就如一张白纸,没有一点思路,有如同短路了一样。快结束了,我实在没办法了,就乱写一通,记流水账攒到了字数,交给了老师。
下课了,我一直闷闷不乐,心里仿佛一块大石头,我心里想:老师千万别今天批出来,老师千万别今天批出来。星期一,叫我重写,我可以回家写好,星期一交。想不通的问题回去问妈妈,问题解决了,再好好写一篇。
下课的时间,我一直看着张老师,批了几张,批了一半,还剩一点,我心里一直徘徊着一句话:批慢一点,批慢一点······
最后一节课,张老师还是批出来,把同学们存在的问题讲了一遍,我听得格外专注,来弥补我的漏洞。
一回到家,我把今天作文的事情讲给妈妈听,拿出语文书,给妈妈看作文的`题目,问了我想不通的问题,但妈妈只告诉我一句话:做什么事都要认真对待,不能敷衍了事,。成功只属于有付出的人。
我听了妈妈的话,一直铭记在心,开始研究题目,不放过一字一句,终于,我自己找到了答案,解决了问题。
当天晚上,我真真切切地付出了感情地小草的顽强,坚持不懈,写小草怎么从一粒小种子,在没有水分,没有阳光,没有土壤的地方,把石头顶开,变成一株完美的小草。小草也告诉我一个道理:坚持,才能完美。妈妈看了,竖起了大拇指。
张老师看了。给我打了优秀。
什么事都要做到底,做得完美,要认真对待,不可以半途而废,我要学习小草,做一个坚强的人。
机会只留给有准备的人。
我为什么想做一名警察呢?那是因为我觉得这份职业非常富有有责任感,既要帮助人民破案,也要在自己的岗位上一直努力的工作,我觉得警察的.工作,是非常有价值的。听,警笛拉响了,我要去工作了。我飞快的跑下楼,坐上了一辆警车,急急忙忙的向报警区域驶去。
一到了那里,我们赶紧下车,原来是发生车祸了,我们赶紧对肇事车辆拍摄车牌号。并调取了这里的监控。因为肇事车辆里空无一人。这时,救护车急急忙忙的驶来了。将伤员带走了。将照片带回警察局后,我们开始了调查。不一会儿就出了结果。原来,肇事车辆的主人在发生车祸的那一瞬间,打开了车门,趁人多的时候一跃而下,再迅速关上车门。装成一个看热闹的行人,但这一连串的动作,仅仅不到5秒,就已经做完了。
之后我们逮捕了肇事车辆的主人,原来是因为醉驾才引发的车祸。看来警察的破案速度还是挺快的呢。不过,在以后可千万不能酒驾开车了,否则极容易引发车祸呢。
我喜欢做一名警察,因为自己的思维可以获得提升,同时,还可以为人民服务,这是一件多么好,多么幸福的事啊!所以,我喜欢这份职业。
终于又到了周末!周末在人们的脑海里是快乐而幸福的,因为可以不用去上班也可以不用去上学,家人可以团聚在一起休闲和玩乐。但是我的周末总是充满着遗憾,因为那些恼人的`作业让我无法尽兴。
假如这个周末没有作业,我就可以尽情地玩耍。我想去天津参观被称为“滨海之眼”的滨海图书馆,在书海中拾贝,而不用担心路途遥远而无法写作业的问题;我想和同学一起去公园骑车、“撕名牌”或者联机打游戏而不被家长催着写作业;我想看自己喜欢的书,想看多久就看多久,一点儿不受作业的干扰;我想下棋、画画等等,总之没有作业我玩什么都痛快。
假如这个周末没有作业,我就可以去看望我的姥姥、姥爷。今天是重阳节,我想去帮姥姥、姥爷做些家务,我想去给他们捶个背洗个脚,晚上吃一顿姥姥做的美味佳肴,夜里我可以和他们睡在一张大床上,听他们讲述他们年轻时候的故事,这将是多么幸福的周末呀!
假如这个周末没有作业,我会是一个好脾气的孩子。其实我的脾气并不差,只是经常在我玩到兴头上的时候,妈妈会问作业写完了吗,然后我会不情愿地放下手中的玩具被迫去写作业,这让我产生怒气积在心里,不知什么时候就会像火山爆发一样发泄出来,然后就会被爸妈一起批评。要是没有作业我哪会发脾气呀。
可惜这只是“假如”,我不得不从这白日梦中醒过来,接受这残酷的现实,继续赶着这周末的作业了。
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