My favourite swimmer is Sun Yang.He swims very fast.He took part in the last Olympic Games.He is my hero.
He is 21 years oid.He is very tall.He is 198cm tall.He is cute.I love him.
He is good at swingming very much, He has had all-round success in his study olypic games.
共鸣需要心理的平行,而要想让你的评语具有吸引力,让他们感受到作文的魅力,你还必须让你的点评语言与孩子有一定的平行性,即你的作文评语应该是他们乐于接受的语言。平行除了表现在语言文字的表达外,还可以借助其他多种形式,如QQ表情,就是一种简洁而明快的评价语言。会心的一笑,调皮,摆酷。难为情……都可以成为你作文评语的一种。如徐梦婷同学在《粗心的我》作文中写了因为自己没有将洗笔杯冲刷干净,而导致了想画紫葡萄却画出了黑葡萄的粗心事。我一连用了三个夸张的大笑表情之后,这样点拨:“悄悄地告诉你一个小技巧:如果在画葡萄之前不交代瓶子没有洗干净,而等花出了黑葡萄发现不对劲时,才明白交代其中原委,这样作文就有了一个起伏,显得有了‘情节’读起来会让人随文而入。这就叫引人入胜。”当她在习作中竟然意外学会了一些方法,会有多么的惊喜,相信在以后的作文中会更精心了。
蔚蓝的天空中挂着一轮火红的圆日,下面是一座美丽的山城,到处是长长的街道。一条宽阔的马路上,一个十一二岁的少年骑着自行车,鼻子上沁出晶莹的汗珠,双手悠闲地垂在身体两侧,双脚飞快地蹬着脚踏板。
这少年便是我的小伙伴——李浩宇。他与我同岁,但个子比我高出许多。每到下课,他都会第一个冲向操场,足球网前有他快活的身影,单双杠下由他灵动的身姿......
我知道李浩宇的骑车技术十分精湛。有一日,我便要他给我表演一下,他爽快地答应了。于是他跨上车子,两手紧紧地握着车把,右脚踏在脚踏板上,左脚踩在地上。他右脚使劲一蹬,左脚迅速收起,双脚齐用力,自行车像注入活力似的,一眨眼的工夫就跑出去好远。突然,一个急刹车,自行车的后轮高高地抬起,随即又落下。我愣住了,生怕他摔倒。谁知他又弓着腰,双手紧握车把,双脚在半空中飞快地画了一个又一个圆。渐渐的,速度越来越快。他两只手完全离开 车把,身子立得直直的,像根竹竿,但自行车还是飞快地奔跑着。我看着都有些担心,但他依旧神情自然,毫不惧怕。他还给我表演了:抬前轮和漂移。每当表演完李浩宇的嘴角总是微微上扬,摆出一副很得意的样子。他似乎很喜欢漂移时发出的那一声响,每次都会做出很享受的样子。
我看了他的表演,心里十分羡慕,便走到他身边,说:“你骑得真好呀!”李浩宇骄傲地回答:“那当然。”“你的技术这么好,当我的教练没问题。”“好的,星期天到我家来,我教你。”
我便日日盼望星期天,可总是没有机会。终于有一天,阳光明媚,温暖的阳光驱走了往日的寒冷,正是个骑车的好日子,我俩相约来到体育场。“首先教你最简单的抬后轮。”李浩宇一边给我示范,一边说,“先把车子骑快一点,再猛得一刹前闸,就可以了。但是要记住一点,一定要保持平衡。”我点点头,接过车子,学着他的样子做,把车子骑得飞快,猛一刹前闸,摔了个人仰马翻。他说:“别着急,慢慢来,我是练了好多次才成功的。”说着,他得意地甩了甩头发,跨上车子来了个漂亮的漂移。后来,他又教了我几个花样,但我都没有学会。可见,冰冻三尺非一日之寒啊。
这就是我的小伙伴—— 一个骑车技术高超而又爱耍酷的.阳光男孩。
雨过天晴的空气中掺杂着一丝泥土特有的芳香,明媚的阳光无私的照耀着每一个事物,天与地之间的一切都褪去了阴雨时的沉寂气息。而我和她初次相识,正是在雨过天晴的一棵桃树下。
她一头乌黑而又充满光泽的卷发,月牙形的带着灵气的小眼睛,高高的鼻梁,薄薄的小嘴很是惹人喜爱。
小时候的我一点也不灵活,当看见别的小朋友在双杠上灵活地翻身,心中便有一种说不出的滋味。而恰巧,在我和一群伙伴们玩耍时,路过一棵桃树,上面结了几个发青的小桃子,许多伙伴们一跳、一抓,又向上爬几步,便轻松地站到树顶,其中就包括聪明灵敏的她。看着小伙伴在桃树上耀武扬威,我也跃跃欲试,但当手触碰到冰冷的树皮时,我只能望而却步。
不一会儿,除我以外的所有人都坐在了桃树上,那三四个人手中也紧紧攥着未熟透的桃子。看着他们,那种不甘心、失落和自卑涌上心头,毕竟在这个本就该放肆玩闹的年纪,谁又想被人嘲笑呢?
“喂,你怎么不上来呀?上面好玩着呢!”一个伙伴问道。我红着眼圈,茫然地看着他。“就是呀,怕是上不来吧?哈哈哈,胆小鬼!”另一个伙伴似乎猜中了我的心思。兴许是那时年幼无知,他们并不知道这一句句不经意间的玩笑与嘲讽,宛如一把把利刃,插进了我脆弱的心灵。我只有蹲在老桃树下,默然地哭泣。而她,也只是盯着我。突然,又好似下了决心,轻捷地跳下树,一把拉住我的手,发绳上的铃当欢快的摇动着。“我带你上去。”她坚定地说,树上的人都看呆了,而她不顾别人的眼神,拉着我,缓缓向上爬。中途好几次,笨拙的我踩空了,向下滑去,她不顾自己,用力拉住我,她抽出手用力抹了一下脸上的汗珠,冲我笑了笑。
从这以后,她便成为了我生活中最好的朋友。而我每当走过那棵桃树,脑海中便浮现出她热情洋溢的笑脸和伴着涔涔铃音的背影。那个不顾自己的女孩似乎又在树上坐着冲我招手。
Dear Sir/Madam:
As a teacher at xxxx school, I am writing to provide you a recommendation for Miss/Mr.xx so as to help you assess her/his application for acceptance into your program and consideration for financial aid.
Considered a promising student with originality and sophistication in her/his thinking, (she/he was asked, in the spring semester of 2008, to develop a subsystem of a DBMS project for her B.S.thesis, for which I was the chief leader. T
his subsystem was designed to manage the information of materials in NO.1 Foundry Plant of Dongfeng Auto Works.To do the job, she/he read many books about software engineering and took some courses in Database Principles and Management. Keenly aware that the design of a DBMS decides the quality of the whole software system, she did her/his utmost from the beginning of the project.(参加过什么活动. From analyzing users requirements to designing the whole system, from the detailed designing to the final programming, she was very level-headed and full of innovation every step of the way. Taking full advantage of her ability and creativity, she firmly focused herself on her objective and gnored all distractions. She successfully reached her goal. In the final software testing, only a few bugs were found in her subsystem. My appreciation of her talelent was thus confirmed.Miss is a very personable woman, friendly and helpful, and she has always been a team player in her work.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give her application for candidacy to your Ph.D. program favorable consideration. Should you need any further information in your deliberation, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely xxxx
I have a great mother. She cares much about me in my life and study.
In the morning, she gets up early to make breakfast for me. When I was little, she prepared my schoolbag. But now, she tells me to do it by myself. Because she thinks I have been old enough to do it. Besides, she always checks my homework. When I finish my homework, she checks it and points out the mistakes. She is very careful and helps me a lot.
I love my mother.
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