五年级英语作文设计【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文设计【二】
假如我是建筑设计师，我会在贫困山区建许多楼房，为那里的贫民用上幸福的家园。
假如我是建筑设计师，我会在没用的空地上多建几个车库或者是几个车场，没有地方停车的车停车在这里，人们就会因为没停车场而发愁。
假如我是建筑设计师，我会在许多居民楼旁都建起健身房，居民可以免费出入，里面健美设备非常多，男、女、杨家、较少都有相对的设施。儿童磨练可以强壮骨骼，中年人磨练可以强壮身体，老人磨练可以增强体质。
假如我是建筑设计师，我会在偏远的地方辟一个大水池。每一条街道龙骨的地方都通往那里，而且还有净化功能，还要在每一条街道补设上一层冷却装置。大雨的时候，雨水可以顺着下水道流到大水池里，还可以储存沸水，如果那个地方旱季了，就可以用储存的水灌溉农田。冬天下雨的时候，就可以启动街道上的‘冷却功能’，把路面上的积雪融化流向蓄水池。为人们上下班带给便利。
假如我是建筑设计师，我还不会为经常地震的地区，设置防震的地面和移往地震的装置，当大地震来了，地面不会非常的大位，像泰山一样。在地下的转震装置不会把震动移往到无人的地区。让人们安心，会在提心吊胆了。
假如我是建筑设计师，我会不择手段的希望，多为社会作出贡献，让我们的世界显得越来越好，越来越美。
五年级英语作文设计【三】
在未来的几个世纪，人类的科技突飞猛进。2407年，人类正急需一种抗灾的国家会议室，总理把这个建筑设计任务转交给了时任建筑设计师的我。
要把房子建成适合抗灾的形状，必须使用像鲸一样流线型的建筑。地基使用稳定的三角形实心结构，这样可以防止被洪水冲垮。回到地平线，有十个像爪子一样的装置深入地下，在地震来临时可以随地面晃动而不会破裂。顺着这个流线型建筑向上爬，有一根巨型避雷针，由于这个建筑是用一种特殊材料制成，所以非常吸引雷电的“注意”，这就需要一个更吸引雷电而又不会被电击碎的东西保护。
跨进大门，眼前是一间非常宽敞的大厅，摆放着许多连接地下的扶手椅，这也是为了固定这座建筑而建的休息厅，专门用于接待国外和国内的元首及随从人员。再穿过一扇门，有一个正式的会议室，专用于访谈及讨论各种问题和大型会晤，采用的是明清时期的墙壁和天花板，体现了更多的古典韵味，展现了我们中华不忘历史的风格。
这栋建筑没有任何富现堂皇的表现，普通而又华丽，这建筑的外观虽然简单，但却可以为国家打开外交的大门，我想，这么大的作用，这就可以完工了吧。
看着这伟大的作品，让我浮想联翩，想想看，四百岁的我，回忆11岁的时光，那建筑也象这样这么美。从书中看到的昔日国家大剧院，已远去宋都开封旅游江南的我，还会思念正在建造中那栋长时间保存的建筑吗？
五年级英语作文设计【四】
假如我是一名服装设计师，我会设计出许多有保暖和防晒的衣服，把我最为自豪的衣服带给人们。下面，请看“林大师”设计的衣服吧。
保暖衣服和防晒衣服。如果你觉得非常冷的时候，自动调最合适的温度，就像变色龙一样，可以随着周围的变化而变化。
如果你觉得炎热的太阳在你头顶上，很热，而又不能脱衣服，那样我的防晒衣就派上用场了。防晒衣是一种防晒布料造成的，里面还含有北极的雪、南极的冰和冷空气，令人感到一阵阵凉快。不过，它最大的作用是——可以节省用电量。又省电、又方便。你们一定期待着这样的衣服“诞生”吧？
你知道吗，明星是最害怕和别人“撞”衣服的。所以，我这件衣服是专门为明星设计的。
如果你是明星，一定会想要一件可以分析全世界的人们正在穿什么衣服、什么颜色，什么格式。然后，就根据他（她）们穿什么衣服、制造出一件独一无二的“不怕撞衣服”。我说的是吧。
下面，就让明星们“梦想成真”吧！我根据了电脑的百科全书，制造一件“不怕撞衣服”
它有这两样功能：1、假如你看到有人和你穿同样的衣服，你可以按红色的按钮，它立刻进行全世界的穿衣服的情况来变一件独一无二的衣服。2、如果有人弄脏你的衣服，你一定很生气吧？不过，只要你按黑色的按钮，不用一秒钟，再脏的污垢，马上就会消失到“九霄云外”。
我真希望自己是个服装设计师，为人们设计出他们喜欢的服装。
