忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题

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忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题【一】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题【二】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题【三】

最近我和弟弟又开始忙碌起来。

事情是这样的范老豆让我和弟弟在同一天写日记,我们组也会一天得到更多的分。所以我们变得抢手了。但谁能体会到我们的辛苦?我们第一个要解决的问题是去哪组写?我们不费吹灰之力想出了一个绝妙的主意。那就是弟弟这周选一个组长,我下一周选一个组长。这周该我选了,结果弟弟已经预约了下组了,这怎么让我给薛豆(我选的组)交待呀!

我们第二个要解决问题是该怎样写!以前我们不这样的时候作业早早的就写完了,可现在呢?我写作业的时候他也写,我要写日记的时候呢,他也要写,这只能让我“掩着面叹息”了我们以后总结了经验,会先相互问一声再开始写!由于毽子社团星期一至星期五都要学,所以我五点多才能到家,到家后还要吃晚饭,本来我吃饭就慢,再加上新概念英语什么的,少说也要到九点!早上六点多就得起床只能睡九个小时,这可怎么活啊!

又是一个繁忙的夜晚,加油吧!

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题【四】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

忙碌的周末中考英语作文真题【六】

东湖爷爷是个大忙人,从早到晚都在干活,瞧!他又忙起来了。天蒙蒙亮,他就开始叫太阳起床,先捋捋胡子,然后中气十足的喊道:“太阳,起床啦!”太阳只好依依不舍地离开了温暖而舒适的小窝,他先伸了一个大懒腰,然后打着哈欠说:“再睡会儿。”于是他又倒头睡觉了。东湖爷爷使劲地摇他,才睡眼惺惺的起来工作,爷爷见他效率太低,嘴上还不停地碎碎念。

不过,东湖爷爷对他的孙女儿——柳树妹妹可大不相同,什么事都宠着她,又是喂她喝水,又是帮她梳妆,可怜的太阳,只有在旁羡慕的份儿。催完太阳,爷爷又来催小孩儿,见孩子们慢腾腾地挪着步去上学,东湖爷爷急的使劲地喊着:“快点儿,再慢就迟到啦!”

一个忙碌的早晨就这样在东湖爷爷的催促声下过去了。一眨眼就到了中午,正午的太阳像个大火球,从高空直射下来,晒得东湖爷爷直扇扇子。早晨,树叶还挺神气地舒展着,现在却卷起来了,小鸡也急忙躲在墙角,展开翅膀歇凉。平常凶猛的狗,现在也不神气了,特别是旁边树上的蝉伯伯热得都唱起歌儿来了。倒是东湖爷爷还有心思工作,他对着幼儿园一个个粉嘟嘟的小孩儿说:“该吃饭了,别饿坏了肚子!”鸟妈妈一见,便配合的打起了午餐铃:“啾啾,啾啾!”,东湖爷爷见孩子们狼吞虎咽地吃起来,还不忘说:“慢点吃,别噎着了,记得,只吃七分饱!”时间一晃就过去了,不一会儿就到了傍晚。

今天的\'月亮好像被什么咬了一口,不那么圆了,那个豁口的边沿一点也不整齐,这儿多一点儿,那儿少一点,看起来很不顺眼,一位小女孩儿童言无忌的笑着说:“吃月亮的人一定是一个没牙的老头,不信你瞧,咬的多不齐。”这时,东湖不好意思的笑了,原来是他偷吃了几块嫦娥的糖果呀。小女孩走后,东湖爷爷便倒头大睡了,瞧,还在打呼噜呢。东湖爷爷总是那么忙,但正是因为他,我们的家园才会这么美。

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