初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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My name is Wu Yuwei .I’m 13 years old. I’m a Chinese girl .I study in Xinqi PrimarySchool.I’m in Class 3,Grade 6. I’m in Row 3. I have many friends in class.For example, Che Lei is my best friend . She is 13 years old , too. She is a good girl. We often help each other.There are four people in my family .They are my father, mother, sister and me .My parents are formers . They work hard. My sister is a student . I love them and they love me ,too.
你好!
我是南昌市外国语百树学校五七班的魏虹艳。看到这封信你一定很惊讶吧?这次写信是因为我们五年级“手拉手”活动,我希望我们可以架起一座友谊之桥。
我们的校园非常美丽,有两栋教学楼,两个操场和一个花园。第一教学楼是1至4年级小盆友上课的地方;那第二栋教学楼就是我们五年级大哥哥大姐姐上课的地方了。花园里有各种奇花异草,如:牡丹,玫瑰,菊花……还有一些说不出来的。学校的课程很丰富,有体育,音乐,舞蹈等课程。
我最擅长的是语文,英语,如果你有什么一些这方面的问题,我们可以一起探讨一起学习,取长补短。我的数学成绩不太好,普通还好,但一到大考试,就不如平常了,你有什么好方法可以告诉我吗?
我们班的各个同学都有不同的特点:郭泽儒,他虽然是个男生,但很会跳舞,还曾参加市里的拉丁舞比赛呢。老师叫他做小助手,他不但没有做到,反而经常惹老师生气。而陈思远,是个很怪的'女孩,有的男生有时候很讨厌跟他在一起,又有时候跟他玩的很开心。
接下来让我来介绍一下我的家庭吧。我家有六个人:爸爸、妈妈、我、爷爷、奶奶、弟弟。我弟弟已经四岁了,在家是个小霸王。他已经会穿鞋了,但还是不愿自己穿。
好了,我向你介绍了这么多关于我的情况,那你的情况怎么样呢?希望能尽快收到你的回信。
最后,祝你身体健康,学习进步!
你好,西部的小朋友,我虽然不认识你,但我想和你们其中的一位交个朋友。
我是来自陕西省西安市未央区玄武路,陕西师范大学锦园小学五年级五班的冉思彤,我有一头乌黑发亮又多的头发,一双大大的、亮晶晶的眼睛,睫毛又长又密,圆圆的脸蛋上有一个樱桃小嘴巴,使我看上去很可爱。我今年11岁,有点内向,爱好是看书、画漫画,我还喜欢看动漫,因为看动漫能让我有许多画漫画的灵感,所以也算我的一大爱好。
我的家乡有许多著名的5A级景区,也有好多好玩的.地方,比如:我国五岳之一的华山,世界第八大奇迹秦始皇兵马俑,大雁塔,小雁塔,大唐芙蓉园,华清池,王顺山,法门寺……
还有我家乡的十大特色美食,牛羊肉泡馍,黄桂稠酒,荞面饸烙,凉皮,甑糕,肉夹馍,镜糕,粉蒸肉,肉丸胡辣汤。
此外还有著名的陕西八大怪:
一、板凳不坐蹲起来。
二、房子半边盖。
三、姑娘不对外。
四、帕帕头上盖。
五、面条像裤带。
六、锅盔像锅盖。
七、油泼辣子一道菜。
八、秦腔不唱吼起来。
这就是我的家乡,你的家乡又是怎样的呢?赶快来介绍给我听听吧!
祝你
学习进步,天天向上!
冉思彤
2018年3月13日
朋友是春天的一缕微风,是夏日里的一股清泉,是秋的一片落叶,是寒冬的一丝暖意。也许很卑微,但很伟大。
朋友是沙漠里的一片绿洲,浩瀚大海中的指明灯,是高原上的一棵草,是珠穆朗玛峰的一片雪,是海边的一粒沙。也许默默无闻,但很伟大。
朋友只是在你失意的'时候陪你说话,高兴的时候和你一起享受,不需要什么承诺,只有信任与真诚。也许简单,但很伟大。
朋友,身边无处不是。珍惜是每个朋友应该做的。
朋友之间的离别,无言胜有言,一切尽在不言中。“天下无不散之宴席”但我仍相信,世间有无老的友情。因为我们是朋友。
朋友之间没有隔阂,因为我们坦然。朋友之间没有隐私,因为我们彼此相信。朋友之间没有猜疑,因为我们互相谅解。
朋友是世间最美的人。
朋友,文章讲述了朋友的意义,这篇文章语言自然,语句流畅和谐。综合运用多种辞格,使语言富有形象感;多处排比,增强了气势,更显作者语言功力之不菲。
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as I'm concerned, he's very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present.
我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫菲利普。我觉得他是非常善良和慷慨的。当我在高中的时候,他对我很友好、很真诚。我高兴的时候,他也和我一起开心。当我难过时,他总是安慰我。当我失败时,他总是鼓励我。当我迷茫时,他总是拉我一把。尽管有时候我们会吵架,我们关系仍然很好。争吵之后我们可以更好的了解对方。我生日的时候,他总是送我一份特别的礼物。
He's very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.
他非常勤劳也很聪明。在学校他总是很努力学习。由于他的努力,他总是能在中取得好成绩。他的英语口语比我好。大多数时候他都愿意用英语和我聊天。由于他的帮助,我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步。
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