英语作文书写不美观如何扣分【一】
爷孙俩坐在自家楼上的窗前向外望去，爷爷情不自禁地感叹到：还是以前好啊！能看到满天的繁星，叫人有无限的遐想。孙子说：满街的霓虹闪烁，真漂亮，还是现在好。
这反映了爷孙两代人的不同审美观，客观地体现了如何正确处理市场经济中，环境保护与经济发展的关系问题。
新中国成立初期，天空蔚蓝，河水清澈见底，夜晚无以计数的繁星点缀天空，这正是爷爷所经历过的那个时代的环境。可是那时人们日出而作，日落而息，虽然远离了刀耕火种，但社会生产力仍不发达，人们的\'梦想只能是填饱肚子而已。
现在，随着年代的增长，科学技术的不断进步，我们有了电脑，有了网络，人类以进入了信息化时代。满街的霓虹闪烁，就是这个时代的缩影，体现了社会生活的富裕和繁华。
由于经济利益的驱使，人类开始不注意保护环境。随之而来的是气候变暖、山洪暴发，雾霾天气等灾害随即发生。我国当前就是这种状况。
上世纪50年代，英国首都伦敦初尝了工业化的恶果。
1952年12月，一场罕见的烟雾笼罩了伦敦上空，整个城市空气刺鼻，气味难闻，以后这个城市的空气就再也没有清新过。由此，伦敦变成了世界闻名的雾都。
经过50年的治理，今日的伦敦蓝天白云，绿树成荫，芳草萋萋，碧水粼粼，是一座美不胜收的大都市，也是最适合人类居住的城市之一。我们绝不能再走伦敦城市发展的老路。
总体来说，不注意环保，对人类无疑是一种自行为。
当前，发展是第一要务，在发展中做好环保，更关系到可持续发展。在对两者关系相互影响的分析中，提出有效措施，是我们务必要做到的。环境保护是经济发展的基础，只有保护好生态平衡，合理开发利用自然资源，才能进一步谈到可持续发展。保护环境与经济发展应该是齐头并进，二者不可偏废其一。
我们有理由相信，用不了多久，爷爷所青睐的满天繁星和孙子喜欢的五彩霓虹，一定能同时出现在美丽的夜空。
英语作文书写不美观如何扣分【二】
When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.
At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story\'s development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu\'why you be the scapegoat of your father?\' Xu answers \'because he is Chinese.\' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.
The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu\'s boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won\'t beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.
Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children\'s right. What\'s more, I remember a line \'No one won the case, especially the child.\' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.
The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades \'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.\' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says \'I have to follow the procedure.\' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.
The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says \'you can\'t fall, your health security is the company paid.\' \'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.\' \'dady, why you come from the window\' \' because we don\'t have a chimney.\' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.
That\'s my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.
英语作文书写不美观如何扣分【三】
This is my first week in ** Senior Middle School.Everything here is new for me.Our school is an old school but it`s very beautiful.I have 50 new classmates in my class.They`re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little sad.Because I`m too common.But come to think of it,it`s a very good thing.I believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent classmates.I didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of study.But I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my ability.All I can do is do my best in the future.I am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very kind.It`s a pleasure to work and study with them.I`m really very happy.I`m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like others.I believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
