2016烟台中考英语作文范文【一】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
2016烟台中考英语作文范文【二】
暑假的一天，我们全家一起去山东玩。那里有波澜壮观的大海，雄伟壮观的高山，哪里的空气真是清新。一上飞机，我的心情非常激动，因为这是我第二次乘坐飞机。这次坐飞机是深夜里坐的，那飞机一会儿往左摇，一会儿往右摇，就这样我就迷迷糊糊的带到了美丽而凉爽的烟台。
第二天早上，我们带着兴奋的心情来到了汽车站，乘坐公交车。不一会儿，就到了风景如画的龙口，一下车，我就看到了满山遍野的小草，在一座座山上显得格外耀眼。我们打了个粗驻车，来到了南山大佛，一抬头，就看到了一座高大雄伟的金色大佛，在不大高的山上挺立着。那座大佛好像在说：“一定要鼓起勇气上去!加油!”我们一下子充足了气，奋勇向前。当我们爬到了山上地时候，我们已经筋疲力尽了，再看看大佛，正在对我们笑呢!第三天，我们又带着好心情来到了威海的极地海洋公园，那里又是一派热闹的景象。那里有热带雨林、极地馆、鳄鱼湾等等。我最喜欢的是海洋剧场，里面是海豚、海狮表演。那里的海狮表演可真是精彩，它们会算数学题、会打击乐、会拍手……最让我大开眼界的是小海狮打击乐。他们能用自己的身体来弹奏乐器，有的用自己的小嘴巴来弹钢琴。有的用自己的前肢来打鼓，还有的用鼻子来跳舞。
真是有趣极了!大海也挡不住我们的心情，我们奔向大海的怀抱。那浪花一浪一浪的拍打着我的小脚丫，我经常踩着那细软的沙滩，在大海边尽情地喊着：“大海我来了!”时间过得飞快，我的小心眼里一直在想着再玩一会。我们趁上了飞机，从上往下看那汽车真像一颗颗小芝麻。房子像一只只大蚂蚁，人一点也看不见了。突然，飞机一下子向上飞了起来，你瞧!那一片又一片的白云轻飘飘的，一会儿往这儿飞，一会儿往哪儿飞，看着看着我真想相一致孙悟空一样踩着云朵上。下了飞机，我们坐上了轰隆隆的动车，来到了杭州火车站。这次旅游真是让我玩得痛快，下次我还要来烟台玩。
2016烟台中考英语作文范文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
