社会百态类作文300字(社会百态类作文600字初中)

社会百态类作文300字(社会百态类作文600字初中)

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社会百态类作文300字(社会百态类作文600字初中)

社会百态类作文300字【一】

【习作题目】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

1.学生给老师打分已很普遍;

2.人们对其持不同态度(肯定或否定的态度);

3.你的看法。

【习作解读】

显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。

此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。

【习作展示】

Students Grading of Their Teachers

Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.

If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.

In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.

【习作点评】

作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作

者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。

二、写作模板

此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people 

Nowadays, there exists a common phenomenon—with the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday comes.

There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.

Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only the young ones.

三、写作指导

写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。

论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。

在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的.出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:

1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。

2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。

4. 一般采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。

四、巩固练习

1.【练习题目】

2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。

【参考范文】

During the period of holding the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.

It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.

Through this kind of work, we become confident and mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.

In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?

2.【练习题目】

某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。

【参考范文】

I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.

First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about 5 million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.

Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.

What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.

So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.

3. 【练习题目】近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。

1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。

2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。

3)传播各民族间的不同文化。

参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator

【参考范文】

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.

There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad.First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They can communicate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods.Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.

Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.

4.【练习题目】随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。

【参考范文】

With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.

I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.

社会百态类作文300字【二】

我们班的下课不但有“跳绳一族”,还有“贪玩人群”呢!他们只要出了教室的门,就聚在一起,商量着今天要玩什么游戏。他们为了节约时间,就每天玩一种游戏,不一会儿就在操场上散开了,在学校里嬉戏,打闹,在欢声中度过课间十分钟。

社会百态类作文300字【三】

青葱的岁月,大部分时间都是在校园度过的,繁忙的学习生活似乎快要把我们压得喘不过气,以至于我们会抓紧课间在仅有的10分钟里各自逍遥。纵观课后,班里出现四大门派,各派争相展示自己的“功力”。

社会百态类作文300字【四】

此派很常见,均匀地分布于教室各个角落。他们最大的特点就是“嘴快”。常是某某君闲来无事,随便谈起某个话题,前座后座、左邻右舍的全部聚在一起七拉八扯的,一会儿谈谈某个明星的八卦,一会儿“侃侃”那个同学的糗事。这个帮派以“大嘴巴”而闻名,一般不受他人的喜爱。

社会百态类作文300字【五】

此派全都聚集在每个组的最后两排。以他们著名的“佛山无影脚”而闻名于世。一下课,座位上好像长了几颗钉子,条件反射地离开座位,非要出去转悠几圈,要么去会见“密友”,要么到走廊上散散步。这个门派因行踪百变,跻身进入了“武林前三”。

社会百态类作文300字【六】

课间一般都是这样开始的:“5、4、3、2、1……下课时间到了老师你们辛苦了”这话音刚落,开门声、脚步声不绝于耳。

每节课下来,总会有那么几个同学座在位子上喝水。教室里顿时成了运动场,许多男同学都走到教室对面的那快空地上,蹿上蹿下,也不知怎的,几个人坐在台阶上,这时阳光斜斜地照着,将他们的发尖染成了金黄,他们的身形也被镀上了橙色的边框就好像是电影里的那些特些镜头。我隐约的能感觉到这时他们满足的笑颜,他们是在看别人玩吗?却被我当成了一道独特的“风景线”。

在装水的地方也站着几个人,半眯着眼,手指吧嗒吧嗒的敲着瓶子。待到水装满水杯时,他们嘴角浮过一丝微笑,听到咕咚咕咚的喝水声,感受着水的.质量,这时他们的眼睛眯的更紧了,嘴角的弧度也更翘了。

稀稀疏疏的阳光照在黑板上,粉笔灰稀稀落落的身影和着风,乘着阳光,旋转着 。

座位上,有人奋笔疾书,有人闭目养神,有人发呆,有人看报,有人讨论题目,也有人说天说地。正是能侃的年华,三三两两的坐在一起,话题应有尽有。也有人做着游戏,像“剪刀、石头、布”什么的,总之,年龄在十至十五岁之间玩的游戏还是那么幼稚,课间也正是零食泛滥成灾的时候,各类“美食”纷纷呈现,“香气四溢”。大家把该说的话,该吃的零食在课间尽情的吃,尽情的玩,自有“今朝之酒,今朝醉”之意。

瞬间,铃声向了,课间百态无影无踪,统一表现出一个姿态。

社会百态类作文300字【七】

假期的心情特别好,今天吃过早餐,哼着歌,随着轻快的拍子,走到阳台的摇椅上看起了新闻。

我看到其中的一侧新闻是这样说的:有一个人假期带着年老的母亲去看冰灯,开心地给老母亲拍照片,拍完了,在那检查是否照片虚了时,老母亲要下台阶,她对身边的女孩说:“闺女,能搭把手给我扶着你下这个台阶吗?”女孩伸出胳膊支持老母亲下那个台阶。老母亲谢过后,身后马上传来了女孩的妈妈教育女孩的声音:“老人要是摔倒,我们家就赔惨了。”

看完了这侧新闻我心都寒了,一个个字硬生生地敲着我的好心情。要知道我们中华传统文化就是尊老爱幼,要是没有人帮助老人,就连扶一下老人也怕成那个样子,怕要承担责任,我们现在谁也不敢扶,以后谁还会扶我们呢?

想了一天,我也想不明白,难道一个老人也扶不起吗?正是:爱吾爱,以及人之爱;老吾老,以及人之老;幼吾幼,以及人之幼。

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