2022年亚运会英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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2022年亚运会英语作文五年级【二】
盼望已久的北京奥运会马上开始了。
打开电视机，响亮的击缶声过后，开始倒计时一串火焰围着鸟巢飞了一圈又一圈，接着烟花不断，击缶声不断；从天安门发起的烟花历史足迹，一共29个，表示这是29届奥运会。落下的脚印变成梦幻五环，被一名名飞天仙女托起。
一个小女孩出现在镜头，她唱起《歌唱祖国》。她那清脆而又甜美的童音，像百灵鸟在歌唱。歌唱中，五十六个民族的小朋友托着五星红旗，来到升旗台边，全体起立，升国旗、唱国歌。观众席上的不同肤色的观众也仰望中国国旗，高声唱起中国国歌。当我们听着外国人也唱起中国国歌，我们是万分激动、热沸腾。国歌声刚刚落地，空中喜庆的烟花绽放开了，礼花五彩缤纷、拥有各种各样的形状，美丽极了；此时，孔子的三千弟子出现在我们眼前。他们一直念：“子曰：学而时习之，不亦乐乎。有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎。”那三千弟子用活字印刷术的板子展现了一个又一个的“和”字，光“和”字就这么多写法，我相信，外国人一定看得目瞪口呆；这一个个“和”字代表中国、世界想过和平，安定的生活。一群戏剧演员走上舞台，仔细一看，原来主角是一个个可爱的提线木偶；又一个高潮到了：一只只船队来到了舞台，原来他们是去海上丝绸之路的。这不正说明了我国古代的航海技术就很高超呀！
终于到了最高潮，火炬手开始在场内开始传递了，神秘的最后一棒火炬手终于来了，啊！原来是李宁，李宁居然神奇地“飞”了起来，“飞”过了一幅长长的`画卷，来到了主火炬前，点燃了主火炬，这时全国人民激动的心情无法用语言表达……
啊！中国，你能把奥运开幕式办得这么好！真是前无古人，还有可能是后无来者。总而言之这次开幕式是历史上最好的一次了，它做到了“人文奥运，绿色奥运”——两个办好奥运的重要目的。中国人民称赞它，世界人民也称赞它，它是我们中国人民的骄傲
啊！中国，真牛！
