作文中描写难过心情的句子

作文中描写难过心情的句子

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作文中描写难过心情的句子

作文中描写难过心情的句子【一】

好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:

● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。

● 长短句结合。

由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:

I think …

I hope…

He does it.

He will take it

这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:

1.间或使用主从复句。

Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因

比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.

2.使用分词结构句。

The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.

比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.

3.使用不定式句。

To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚

To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申

To do it well, you must plan it well.

比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.

4.倒装句

Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.

比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.

No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.

比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.

5.失衡句

whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.

比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.

That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.

比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.

当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:

●As a creature, every one knows.

●Actions speak louder than words.

●Practice makes perfect.

作文中描写难过心情的句子【二】

在我的暑假生活里有着许许多多的事,这些事有的让我伤心,有的让我难过,有的让我开心,有的让我惊憾,可最让我难忘的还是那件让我难过已久的事。

暑假的一个晚上我和我的爸爸在家里看着电视,电视里的人物和动作以及话语让我和爸爸哈哈大笑,过了一会爸爸的电话响了起来,爸爸去接电话可是后来爸爸一下子沉了起来,说:“好,我马上。”说完了爸爸穿好了衣服所沉沉的走了出去。

第二天爸爸回来了,他说爷爷去世了,今天他还要去守着,听了这个消息,我和妈妈十分的伤心,这一天我们都很难过。

到了第三天我们一家和大家等人来到了火化场,来参加爷爷的致别。

在唱歌时我们大家都很伤心,我很想哭可是要止住,可我到了后来止不住最后还是哭了出来。

这就是一件难过的事,虽然爷爷已经去世,但是他仿佛还在我的身旁照料着我,因为爷爷以去,但愿爷爷在另一个世界过得好。

作文中描写难过心情的句子【三】

一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。

●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.

●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.

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