小学五年级英语作文mybirthday【一】
虽然搬进新家已经几年了，但一奶一一奶一总时不时地提起老家。一提起老家，我脑海里就会浮现出自家院子里的那棵柚子树。
春天，柚子树长满了密密麻麻的新叶。但你若是细看，就会发现一个个“迷你”小柚子!它们每天都在生长，挣扎着让自己变大、变甜、变成熟。望着满树的“迷你”柚子，我和小伙伴们禁不住诱一惑，隔几天就会摘下一两个来“品尝”。虽然每次吃到嘴里的柚子都是又酸又苦，但大家的心里却是“甜”的！
夏天，柚子树显得更加苍翠茂盛，好似在院子里撑了一把绿色的巨伞，为我们挡住了夏天的酷热。这时，柚子也比以前大多了。我和小伙伴们一起在树下乘凉时，不知是谁提议，说我们来踢“柚子球”了。这下，那些个大的柚子可就遭殃了，还 没成熟，就被我们这些“小捣蛋”摘下来当球踢。但这若让一奶一一奶一看到，肯定少不了一顿骂！
秋天，柚子真的成熟了！一奶一一奶一把这些柚子都摘下来，总不忘分几个给左邻右舍。隔壁的王一奶一一奶一和孙爷爷拿到柚子，乐得合不拢嘴。大家一般都舍不得吃柚子，只闻柚香。前后六七户人家，没有一户不“沉浸”在柚子的清香里。
冬天，虽然树上的柚子没了，但这一年中，柚子给我们带来的快乐，足以一温一暖整个冬天……
几年过去了，院子里的柚子树早被砍掉了，连老家的房子都被拆掉了。但每当听一奶一一奶一提起老家，我总会想起五六年前，老家院子里的那棵给我童年带来无穷欢乐的柚子树！
小学五年级英语作文mybirthday【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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小学五年级英语作文mybirthday【三】
我从小就听妈妈讲过诺贝尔的故事。从此诺贝尔这个名字便深深地刻在了我的心中。
今天，我看到《最后的辉煌》这一课，我怀着崇敬的心情将课文默读了好几次，当我读到“为了发明炸药，诺贝尔和他的家人付出了的代价。在实验中，他的弟弟被炸，他的父亲被炸成残疾，他自己也被炸的满身鲜。”时，我的心如刀绞一般疼痛，同时又被诺贝尔为了实验而放弃自己的一切的精神。他能做到这一点，是因为他有为科学而献身的精神。
再看看我，平时做一个实验是处处想着会不会被电打着呀！会不会烧着手呀等问题。如果有危险的话就不做这个实验了。在诺贝尔面前，我是多么惭愧，多么渺小啊！
不光诺贝尔有为了科学而献身的精神，连爱迪生也有为科学而献身的精神。爱迪生小的时候家里很穷，他的父亲让他去火车上卖报纸，他非常喜欢亲自动手做实验。在卖报纸的时间里，他总要抽出空儿去做各种有趣的实验。火车长见他这样酷爱实验，便给了他一个火车上的小房间作为他的实验室。有一天，由于火车的震动过厉害，把实验室里的一种化学物品打翻了。化学物品和空气结合起了化学反应，使整个实验室爆炸了。所有的实验用品都报废了。爱迪生也被赶出了火车。
这个故事再一次告诉我们，要有为科学而献身的精神。不仅我们要有这样的精神，全世界的人都应该有这种精神。
