我是复旦大学数学系教授,在此写信推荐王XX。我认识王XX自大学二年级,担任他的导师。在我眼中,他是一个勤奋的学生和一个令人钦佩的孩子。
他是一个令人印象深刻的学生,因为在他大一年级的时候他不得不克服与挑战严重疾病。在我的数学课上第一次遇见他,并没有觉得他有什么特别的!然而,他的成绩好得高过我对他的期望。王XX试图把所有困难的早期数学课程,同时包括离散数学、高等数学,线性代数都学好,在此期间我是不知道他是有病在身的。而大多数学生认为王XX同学就算只准备一门课程的考试都很难,然而,最终他取得一个令所有人都意外的期末成绩,使我深深意识到他那不寻常的决心,他给我们展示了当面对艰难时是如何的坚强。王同学和我经常谈到的各种数学和计算机科学的概念和问题。
在这些讨论,我总能发现他的见解很独特,是个聪明的孩子。他不仅很快理解概念,同时给他提出的问题,他能够分析并提出解决方案。最重要的是,王同学发现任何问题他都认真负责重新审查,如发现不确定性问题,他立即清除他们。我认为这种想法是成为一名优秀的计算机程序员必须具备的基本条件。作为他的导师我会利用机会时常观察进行思想工作。王老师的论文“网络神经”提出很具有挑战性的议题。在我们的书籍中对于这一议题及其应用是非常罕见的。在中国很少有人研究过这个话题,因此该材料选择是有限的。王同学不仅迎接这项挑战,同时在实践中超越其职责分析出了来源和测试精度。
他的学习能力与工作能力非常让我自豪。王同学是很聪明和勤奋的学生。我知道,如果有机会出国留学,他梦想着在美国成为伟大的程序员。他会抓住一切机会实现这一梦想,同时有智慧和能力实现这一梦想。希望你能接受王XX同学的申请并给予他机会!
我的爸爸是一位建筑工程师。他个子高高瘦瘦,相貌平平常常,黑黝黝的脸上嵌着一双小眼睛,高高的额头上捂着几绺稀疏的头发。要说特别,就数爸爸那双粗糙的大手了,手上似乎长满了小刺。
爸爸平时不爱言语,却很关心我的成长,他总会变着法儿鼓励我努力学习。我一有进步,他就会得意地笑,那高兴劲儿绝不亚于他承揽一项大工程。
尽管爸爸工作很忙,常常起早摸黑,但在我需要他的时候他总是第一时间赶到。记得那是去年冬天里发生的一件事,当时,我的家乡正遭受一场五十年不遇的雪灾,天寒地冻。一天半夜,我突然发起高烧来,爸爸顾不上戴手套,背起我就直奔医院。一路上,由于连日来下冻雨使地面结了一层滑溜溜的冰,爸爸好几次险些滑倒,他只得放慢行走的速度,小心翼翼地迈着步子,一边呼呼地喘着粗气,一边吃力地问我冷不冷。寒风凛冽,我却看到了爸爸额头上惨出的汗珠。爸爸把我送到医院后,怎样打针怎样回家我都记不清楚了。第二天醒来,只见爸爸坐在我床边,眼里布满了丝。他疲惫地看着我微笑,说:“乖女儿退烧了,爸爸该去上班了。”说完就匆匆忙忙地去工地了,留下一个清瘦的背影给我。我的眼睛模糊了,觉得爸爸是这样高大。此刻我深深地到了父爱的伟大,它犹如一只船把我载向成功的彼岸;又犹如一道亮光,为我照亮前进的道路。
我爱我这位既普通又伟大的好爸爸。
In capacity as Professor of Mathematics at Fudan University?I'm writing to recommend Mr. Wang?Gesintosyour PhD program in Computer Science. I have known Mr. Wang since his sophomore year of college?and have acted as his thesis advisormentor. In my experience?he is a gifteddiligent student?and an admirably hard worker.
Wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome the significant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. When I first met Wang in my Discrete Math class?he did not appear to be anything special to me. While his exam scores were good?they were not as high as I would now expect of him.
What I didn't know then was that due to his illness?Wang was attempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one time?including Discrete Mathematics?Advanced Mathematics?Linear Algebra?and Possibilities. While most students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficult?Wang was overwhelmed by four of them. But in the end?he achieved an impressive score on the final exam?which made me conscious of his unusual determination he demonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.
Mr. WangI have often talked about a variety of mathematicscomputer science conceptsproblems. During these discussions?I always found him to be delightfully intelligent. Not only does he quickly understand the conceptsproblems presented to him?he is able to analyze these problemspresent solutions. But perhaps most important is that Wang's thinking is intensely rigorous. When looking at any question?he carefully scrutinizes itif he finds any uncertain issue
he clears them up immediately. I believe this kind of thought is essential to become an excellent computer programmer.
Serving as his thesis advisor?I had a first-hand opportunity to observe the way in which Wang's mind works. In his senor thesis?Mr. Wang mainly discussed two challenging questions in regards to″ANN″。 In our books in China?knowledge of ANNits uses are very rare. Few people in China have studied this topicconsequently?the materials that are available on ANN are limited. Working on this difficult project?not only did Mr. Wang rise to the challenge?but he went abovebeyond the call of duty to analyze his secondary sourcestest them for accuracy in practice. In this way?he found mistakes in the book that we use. His diligencehard work made me extremely proud of him.
假如我出国留学,我会到另一个文化的发源地从而让我进一步了解与中国文化的不同,我学到一些新的东西,我懂得怎样才能更好的与外国人沟通,怎样做才能接近完美。这会让我变得沉着,变得冷静。一个陌生的城市,一场完全不同的生活,一些陌生的面孔和一个人寂寞的生活,我不会缺少朋友,我可以用自己的努力去结识那些不同皮肤,不同文化的朋友。这给我的是勇敢,是信心,困难的问题我会想办法解决它们。这就是我来到另一个地方给我的经验。假如我出国留学,在没有家人的帮助下,你需要依靠自己去改变.每当我遇到麻烦,我会告诉自己不要打电话给父母,我不希望将自己的困难加在父母的身上,这会让他们担心,在我的`生活里,那是一些毕经历的问题。正是它们的存在,我不畏惧打击,通过这些问题,就像在阳光滋润下茁壮成长的大树,我变得坚强。留学的另一方面,让我学习了很多。让我看到我在同一世界是不同的生活。与我携手的朋友,让我的友谊得到更好的美化,成功的到来,敲响了我生命的钟声。这一切需要我的付出才能换回成功的贺礼。我会用自己的行动证明我出国留学后的所得。我坚信。假如我出国留学,未来也与变得不同。
假如我出国留学,我会到另一个文化的发源地从而让我进一步了解与中国文化的不同,我学到一些新的'东西,我懂得怎样才能更好的与外国人沟通,怎样做才能接近完美。这会让我变得沉着,变得冷静。一个陌生的城市,一场完全不同的生活,一些陌生的面孔和一个人寂寞的生活,我不会缺少朋友,我可以用自己的努力去结识那些不同皮肤,不同文化的朋友。这给我的是勇敢,是信心,困难的问题我会想办法解决它们。这就是我来到另一个地方给我的经验。
假如我出国留学,在没有家人的帮助下,你需要依靠自己去改变。每当我遇到麻烦,我会告诉自己不要打电话给父母,我不希望将自己的困难加在父母的身上,这会让他们担心,在我的生活里,那是一些毕经历的问题。正是它们的存在,我不畏惧打击,通过这些问题,就像在阳光滋润下茁壮成长的大树,我变得坚强。
留学的另一方面,让我学习了很多。让我看到我在同一世界是不同的生活。与我携手的朋友,让我的友谊得到更好的美化,成功的到来,敲响了我生命的钟声。
这一切需要我的付出才能换回成功的贺礼。我会用自己的行动证明我出国留学后的所得。我坚信,假如我出国留学,未来也与变得不同。
1.看一遍申请人的个人材料或,这样你的推荐信才能和申请相吻合,而不会在内容上有所冲突或重复。
2.让申请人给你提供更多的材料,如简历等。
3.描述你把该申请人和其他申请人对比的先决条件。
我已从教20年,过去五年来,我指导过大约450名学生的独立研究项目。
五年来,我每年夏天带10名实习生,同时还以大银行集团(Big BankCorp.培训老师的身份带200多名大学生。
4.探讨你对申请人的了解程度。
我认识Doe先生是因为我每周的两次课他都上,而事实上只要求上一次。
史密斯小姐在大六会计事务所(Big Six Accounting Firm升职前两年一直直接向我报告。
5.选你所观察到的申请人的一、两个优点。
珍妮有绝佳的写作和与人交往技巧。Doe先生的特点是坚韧不拔、有分析头脑、善于与人沟通。
6.在描述这些优点的时候,举具体事例来支持你的观点,事例要尽量具体、详细。
他是我所教过的学生中唯一一名把听我所有的课当成一种不懈而最终成功掌握金融理论的努力的学生。班上只有10%的学生得了A,他是其中之一。珍妮有这样好的写作技巧,我毫不犹豫就让她写了一份报告,这份报告是我们政治行动委员会(PAC一项重要政策声明的基础。有了珍妮这20多页关于中东政治的分析,国会议员XXX用这份声明去游说,以图吸纳更多的资金。
7.力求把这名学生的能力量化,或把他和其他申请人相对比。
他是班上10%的好学生之一。在我所知的她的同龄人中,她的'分析能力是最好的。
8.避免一般化和陈词滥调。
9.有一些很温和的批评。
就我所知,他唯一的缺点是他与世无争的性格,这种性格使得他有时隐匿了年轻人的活力和广博的兴趣。
偶尔地,她的坚韧和坚持会变成固执,但通常她都性格很好,头脑也很冷静。
10.谈谈申请人在他/她所选领域里的前景
我竭力向贵商业学校推荐Doe先生,这名成熟的学生会成为一名优秀的商人。
史密斯小姐有优异的领导、写作等才能,她会成为一名出色的战略咨询人员,会成为她所服务的商业机构的骄傲。
From: ****
Department of the SPECIAL CLASS GIFTED for YOUTHS
University of Science and Technology
Hefei, Anhui 230026, P.R. China
July 1, 1998
Dear Sir or Madam:
I take great pleasure in recommending Wang Yong, one of my favorite students, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.
Mr. Wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the SPECIAL CLASS for the GIFTED YOUTHS, my university's unique program that caters to the intellectual needs of unusually talented Chinese youngsters. It was a rare privilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through the years of his elementary and secondary school.
He impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle of china's scientific and technological talents. At the time, members of the Gifted Class all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles of calculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-study capability. Mr. Wang scored the highest grade in that exam. He also exhibited a keenly whetted mind during class discussions. To my regret at the time, his English was not as good as his mathematics or physics.(缺点介绍,公正真实 But I noticed he made a point of working especially hard in improving his English during his five undergraduate years with us. By now, he seems to be at least as proficient in English as most of his former classmates in the Gifted Class.
In my experience with Mr. Wang, I was impressed with not only his extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. I am sure that Mr. Wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program that he may care to enroll in. So I would like to support him firmly in his quest recommendation into account when considering his application. I would greatly appreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.
Yours sincerely
****
Professor and Deputy Head
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