好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
窗前的梧桐树,挺拔,坚强,高大,每一个季节,都有着不同的姿态。梧桐树大概有十几米高。
记得我第一次见到它时,他笔直的站在那里,舒展着手臂。鸟儿在她的肩膀上的家里唧唧喳喳的叫着,似在抱怨酷暑的天气,梧桐它听见了鸟儿的抱怨,用它墨绿的树叶遮蔽住阳光的烘烤。像一个母亲一样保护自己的孩子。
之后的三年里,我看着它度过春夏秋冬,每当我心情不好时,便看向窗外。它站在窗外,让风吹动着它的树叶,慢慢地,我心中的烦闷也让风吹散了。
秋天,梧桐叶变成了金黄色,在阳光的照耀下,金光闪闪的,好不漂亮。尤其是当风拂过叶子金光波动,发出哗哗的歌声,甚是动听。
冬天,梧桐的树枝光秃秃的,露出它的肌肤。冬日的阳光,没有那么热烈,懒洋洋的撒在它的枝干上,竟也是无比和谐。
春天,万物复苏的季节,梧桐从睡梦中苏醒,那张开的手臂,你是在伸懒腰么?嫩绿的的新芽在枝干上,迎着阳光,竹笋一样冒了出来。
夏天,酷热的阳光仿佛要把大地蒸烤一般,大家都躲在教室里,开着空调缓解着热气,可梧桐并不在意,依旧笔直的站在那里。
说起梧桐,给我印象最深的是一场大雨,鉴证了它的坚强。那天天空阴沉沉的,刚上课没一会儿,便开始下雨,雨愈下愈烈,豆大的雨滴砸在玻璃上,咚咚咚的听着人心慌,唯恐玻璃裂开。我透过玻璃看梧桐,挺拔的身影依旧笔直,不畏惧风雨,风狂乱的吹着,周围的小树都吹弯了腰,只有它依旧笔直,不畏惧风雨的摧残。
“天下无双,孝子黄香”孝敬就是中华民族的'传统美德,孝敬更就是每一个孩子应当做到的。这不,这个暑假我家每一天午餐的锅碗我承担了,给妈妈分担家务。
"左擦擦,右擦擦。”我一边哼着自编的小调儿,一边勤快地洗着碗儿。总之,我对洗碗这种小菜一碟的事情就是充满兴趣的。不信,你瞧我这般架势:左手拿碗,右手抓着抹布,有模有样地洗着。可没想到就是,我在中途遇到了一只“拦路虎”:小花碗和我开玩笑,调皮地从我手里溜到了水池里,自个儿跳起了“水上迪斯科”。我生气了,表情由晴转阴,皱起眉头,毫不客气地拿起油油的小花碗,对它气呼呼地说:“你不仁我也不义!"也许它害怕我了,便不再也不敢调皮地玩滑滑梯了。
接下来,我就得理解妈妈的检查了。原本我还以为能够得到一枚“洗碗勋章”。此时可妈妈的话如同晴天霹雳:“哦,这个米粒儿就是怎样回事?”我一下“囧”了,脸瞬间像魔术般红成了大苹果。我立刻拿起碗重新洗,这次,我比刚刚认真了许多,因为我想得到妈妈的认可。
“哦,我最后再次洗完了!”我长舒了一口气,转过身去刚想叫妈妈,却只见妈妈倚在在厨房门旁,欣慰地看着我,给了我一个爱的拥抱。
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