批改网英文自我介绍满分作文【一】
To Whom it May Concern:
I highly recom#mend XXX as a candidate for a teaching/tutoring position. I have worked with XXX in my position as __________(关系.
While a student at Dongseo University, Korea, XXX was involved in various teaching related-positions including teaching a museum program to youth classes.
XXX has a wonderful rapport with people of all ages, especially children and youth. His/her ability to connect with his/her students and his/her talent at teaching simple concepts, as well as more advanced topics, are both truly superior. He/She has excellent written and verbal com#munication skills, is extremely organized, reliable and com#puter literate. XXX can work independently and is able to follow through to ensure that the job gets done. He/She accom#plishes these tasks with great initiative and with a very positive attitude.
I recom#mend XXX to you without reservation. If you have any further questions with regard to her background or qualifications, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely,
XXX
批改网英文自我介绍满分作文【二】
写作文的批语要像中医把脉那样仔细甄别，针对其中的优缺点加以剖析，给学生开出一剂良方。如有位学生写《值得尊敬的一位老师》时，在记叙事件的过程中缺少自己的内心活动，我便在眉批上写道：“你是一个善于观察的学生，你用细腻的笔触生动形象地描写了老师的动作、神态，真棒!当时，你心里怎么想的呢?如果把你自己的心理活动添上去，效果一定会更佳!”这位同学一看到这样的批语，便迫不及待地写上了自己的心理活动。正如叶圣陶先生所说：“教师只给学生加些引导和指点，该怎么改，让学生自己考虑决定。”可见，有针对性的批语能切中要害，能开启学生的心扉，让学生从中受到启迪。
批改网英文自我介绍满分作文【三】
Specimen letter
Dear Mr. Moore,
I wish to apply for the position as waiter mentioned in your advertisement in the local newspaper of May 8. I believe that both my working experience and personal character will prove qualified to your position.
I am at present a fourth- year college student. In order to pay for my expensive tuition, I have taken up different part –time jobs up to now, and one of them was as a waiter in a three-star restaurant for four months. Therefore, I am very familiar with the requirements of the job as waiter. Moreover, I myself like the job very much and I think my personality is well suited to working as a waiter. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all age. In fact, my former boss was surprised at both my incredible stamina and efficiency in dealing with customers’ orders.
My resume is enclosed, but I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience. You may reach me at this number **********after 7:pm any day. Thank you for your consideration of my application.
Yours faithfully
批改网英文自我介绍满分作文【四】
Dear xxx,
I am a professor from the Department of English Language and Literature of Peking University.
As John’s mentor (导师, I would like to write a letter of recommendation on John’s behalf to facilitate his application. Firstly, John is hard working…. (例子 Secondly, John distinguishes himself by his talents in music… Last but not the least, John has strong teamwork spirit…
I would recommend John without reservation. If you have any further question concerning him, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
批改网英文自我介绍满分作文【五】
Dear Sir：
Hello,my name is XXX and my English name is XXX.I'm XX years old.I'm a student in a very beautiful school and I'm in Class X Crade X.I'm very happy and I like to make friends with others, I also like running but travling is my favourite,I have been to many cities in China but I haven't been to other countries.What a pity!When I am at home,I sometimes help my mother to do some housework and my mother said I am a good helper!At school,I often help my teachers to do somthings and I think I am a good helper,too!If you want to learn and speak English well,please remember an old saying,Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it.
