五年级我的派对英语作文怎么写【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级我的派对英语作文怎么写【二】
“生日快乐！”一群人围着一个蛋糕齐声喊道。哈！你一定猜到了吧！有人过生日了，那这次的小寿星又是谁？他是张宇。
急匆匆来到牛排馆，点了一份牛排就开始聊天。十分钟后，有人叫：“牛排来啦！”我听了猛一转头，牛排的香味真浓，我沉浸在牛排香里，一会儿后，便狼吞虎咽起来，嘴里的还没咽下，叉子上却早有一块肉了。
接下来，我们去了“小叮当乐园”。一进乐园，便开始了男女PK赛。 “看我方“飞炮”！”女生拿起海洋球对男生大打出手。“看我方“金华火腿肠”！”陈永晋拿着一个像香肠一样的东西攻了过来，“不好，撤退！”
不知何时，战斗场转移到了海洋球场，“啊！敢打我，看我怎么对付你！”我拿起好几个球，手做了个360度大转弯，“嗨！”顿时，球像雨点般落下来，碰在男生身上，哈，这可替我出了口气。
又过了一会，我们又变了场地，玩起了“捉捉”，啊！追上了，快跑！“加速”哈，追不上了吧！“喂！我们躲在这吧！”一层，二层，玩具屋里，海洋球场里，我们的身影无处不在。
半小时过去了，我们又玩起了“抢球”，男方左边，女方右边，这次是一可与陈听对战，一可快撑不住了，这时一可眼睛一亮，拼命地向陈听那边推，我叫道：“一可，你干什么？你这是把球拱手相让啊！”，只见这时陈听被推倒在地上，球顺着陈听身上溜了过去，这一局，女方胜，“耶”！
我们赢了！“看炮”“看我的飞毛腿”，“啊！好臭呀！我看你这是香港脚吧！其臭无比！”“哈哈哈？我看也是的，哈哈哈？”
8点半了，游乐园里依然有我们的笑声？
五年级我的派对英语作文怎么写【三】
如今战场风云变幻么测，说不定哪一天战争就会降临在我们身旁。而我要为自己的国家尽一点微薄之力，因为一个国家的强与弱就在于军事武器的变化而发展，如果某一个国家武器落后、装备不齐、国防能力差，那么必然会遭到别的国家的攻击，我国边远地区的防御能力比较差。应此作为一个堂堂正正的中国人，我应该为自己的国家多作贡献，制造出许多尖端的武器来增强自己的国防能力，是国家变得更加富强。
我曾听到这样一个故事：抗美援朝的时候，我军的一个整编师把美军的一个营包围了起来，固守在一个阵地上。但由于美军的武器十分先进，仅仅一个营的美军打退了我军的几次攻击，最终突出了包围圈。这是多么大的反差呀！是啊，“落后就要挨打”，只有自己的国家富强了，才能赢得其他国家的敬重。
应为我从小对武器十分感兴趣，遇到这样的书籍和图片总是爱不释手，所以一个当武器研究专家的念头就在我心中不由而生。为此我一定要努力、坚持、奋斗、才能赢取最后的成功。要成功就得接受磨练，磨练是让人成长的营养品。美国著名女作家海伦开了双眼失明，老天无疑给她开了个残酷的玩笑。虽然上帝关闭了她的门，但也给她留了一扇窗，她身残心不残，不懈的努力让她成长起来，走出心理阴影。何况我还是个健全的少年呢！
中国的著名数学家华罗庚说过：没有雄心壮志的人，他们的生活缺乏伟大的功力，自然不能盼望他们会有杰出的成就。所以说一个人有了理想就要不懈的努力奋斗，去实现自己的目标，如果失败了，一定要努力坚持，失败乃成功之母，只有失败过才会成功，只有成功理想才会实现！
历史上、文学上、科技上的灿烂辉煌都源于理想。生命因理想而精彩，生活应理想而更有意义！
