作文中形容遭受巨大打击句子【一】
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样，要有变化性，这不仅能使文章更生动，也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化，主要是要注意两点：
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维，很多人写的文章一种句式到头，如：
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了，却显得呆板，欠生动。解决的办法是：
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较：He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较：The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较：Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较：You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较：After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较：He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较：No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较：Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然，句子并不是越长越好，也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯，一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如：
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
作文中形容遭受巨大打击句子【二】
你们去过柬埔寨的洞里萨河湖吗？那里的湖犹如大海般无边无际，似乎没有边际一样。暑假末的几天，我们一家人坐着飞机来到了那里。
那天，晴空万里，我们坐着巴士来到了湖边。坐在车上，远远望去，这个湖横卧在眼前，仿佛是被施过魔法的，没有边际。我不禁感叹道：“这个湖真大啊！”下了车，我们登上了船，只见周围的房子都带着高高基脚屹立在湖边，里面住着许多人。
过了一会儿，船开了，道路两旁长着茂盛的植被。导游告诉我们：“当雨季来临时，旁边的树林会被淹没，整个湖会被扩大一倍。”那时的洞里萨河湖该会有多大啊！到了湖中央，放眼望去，河的两边有许许多多的房子，它们像船一样漂浮着。我环顾四周，除了房子，周围都是水，就像身处一片汪洋大海一样。听说绕西湖一圈要一天，那么绕洞里萨河湖就至少要走上一个星期呢！
船行驶着，不知不觉中已经过了四十分钟了，连对岸的影子都没有，湖怎么这么大？开了这么久还没到对岸呢！不知又开了多久，终于，我在远处水天相接的地方，模模糊糊地看见了一栋浮在水面上的小屋。
到了河对岸，我望着浑浊的湖面。“大啊！大啊！真大啊！”我呐呐自语道。
