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带比喻句的作文【一】

本人在参加英语BEC中级考试取得了不错的`成绩，现把我半年来在准备作文时常用到的一些句型推荐给大家，希望对备考英语BEC的网友有所帮助。

第一部分、BEC作文段首句常用句型:

一、对立观点命题形式的首句：

1. Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A .

2. Some people say A , other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.

3. There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A , some prefer to CHOOSE B . Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.

4. From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B . 5. Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .

6. In general , I prefer to _____ .

7. As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .

8. When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .

9. When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .

10. At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .

11. When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .

12. When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .

13. When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .

14. When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .

15. While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____ .

二、单一观点式

A . Agree

1. One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .

2. I would follow the reasoning that _____ .

3. Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .

4. I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .

5. After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .

6. my arguments for point are listed as follows.

7. I agree with the above statement because _____ .

8. Nowhere in the world has the issue of _____ been so much debated like in our society .

9. I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation because _____ . 10. Thinking logically , I can only say that the title statement is valid because _____ .

11. I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that _____ .

12. Some may hold the opinion that AAA . But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _____ .

13. Many one have the idea that AAA . However , many others disagree with this argument . But both side of the problem whether _____ are supported by good reasons .

14. Recently , it has been much debated over the problem of AAA . Those who object to AAA announce that _____ . But those who favor AAA utter a sonorous voice that _____ .

15. Recently , there is vehement discussion on the issue of _____ . Those who criticize _____ argue that _____ . They claim that _____ . But people who firmly advocate _____ , on the other hand , argue that _____ .

16. There is a much-debated problem today about _____ . Those who object to _____ argue that _____ . They are very sure about _____ . But people who prefer _____ , on the other hand , claim that _____ .

B . Disagree

1. Until recently , _____ was viewed as _____ . But people are taking a fresh look at it .

2. Recently , we often hear about _____ . But is it ?

3. These days , it is often heard about _____ . But is this really the truth ?

4. I feel such an attitude is negative , and that it can bring _____.

5. Some people argue as if it is a general truth that _____ . But to be frank , I cannot agree with them for the flowing reasons .

6. Despite the fact that many people believe that _____ , I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis .

7. Although some people hold the opinion that _____ , I wonder whether the argument could bear close examination .

8. In the nationwide , discussion , many people argue that _____ . But I can say nothing but _____ .

9. Advocates of AAA proclaim that _____ , but I _____ .

10. Until recently , _____ was regarded as _____ . But _____ .

11. Some people think that _____ , but I disagree with this opinion for numerous reasons , as presented below .

12. Now , it is increasingly mentioned that _____ . Such people think _____ . But I can only cast doubt on whether _____ .

13. Now , it is widely believed that _____ . These people think _____ . But I wonder if _____ .

14. I cannot totally the idea that _____ . Because , in my point of view , I believe _____ .

15. As a matter of fact , I support that _____ , but I cannot agree with the title statement .

16. Nowadays , it is widely held that _____ . People of this kind think _____ .But I doubt whether _____ .

第二部分、BEC作文常用结尾句:

1. Taking into account of all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that_____ .

2. All reliable evidences point to one saying , that is _____ .

3. For the reasons presented above , I strongly commit to the notion that _____ .

4. While it is true that _____ , I think that _____ .

5. Given the factors I have just outlined , I can only say that _____ .

6. This is not to say that _____ . But in terms of _____ , it is _____ .

7. Therefore , it is easy to draw the conclusion that _____ .

8. Recognizing the fact that _____ should drive us to conclude that _____ .

9. To put all into a nutshell , I _____ .

10. In a word , I support the statement that it is better to _____ because Good stuff! Wonder why there are so few hits.

带比喻句的作文【二】

之所以说是一个失败的比喻，是因为作者似乎从头到尾都在有意将韩新月比作奥菲利亚，将楚雁潮比作哈姆雷特，就连最后郑晓京在新月之墓前都煞有介事地说了一句：“谁造出东西来比泥水匠、船匠或是木匠更坚固？掘墓的人！因为他造的房子可以一直住到世界末日。”本以为这一句有什么深意，没想到她淡淡地说：“没有什么特别的意思。你忘了吗？这是《哈姆雷特》里的台词。”（这部作品的一个很重要的缺点也是喜欢各种引经据典，导致文章十分冗长和啰嗦，这一点后面会说）如果说新月与奥菲利亚的共同点是她们都纯洁如白纸、善良近乎博爱，那么哈姆雷特的复仇对象是谁呢？难道要感叹一句“这是一个混乱颠倒的时代，唉，倒霉的我却要负起重整乾坤的责任”吗？显然不是。既然本无此意，那么就不该反复出现这个比喻。奥卡姆剃刀原理说的好：“如无必要，勿增实体。”后来又仔细一想，假如按照这个比喻来的话，那么韩子奇难不成是克劳狄斯？这真的是细思恐极。

此外小说的辞藻过于复杂，本来没必要的`引经据典在这里频频出现，且对推动剧情发展没有任何作用，就比如上文提到的郑晓京在新月之墓前说的那句：“谁造出东西来比泥水匠、船匠或是木匠更坚固？掘墓的人！因为他造的房子可以一直住到世界末日。”紧接着又说：“没有什么特别的意思。你忘了吗？这是《哈姆雷特》里的台词。”和《月亮与六便士》里那句未说出口的圣经以及“一个先令就能买到十三只上等牡蛎的日子”相比这一段话的高下立见。《六便士》的结尾不仅读来让人心潮澎湃，而且回味悠长。还是那句话，“如无必要，勿增实体”，如果没有什么特别的意思，那么为什么还要拿出来提一下呢？徒增文字而已了。

有点像作者在创作过程中反复向读者强调：我在写这本小说的时候读过这些东西！虽然与主角的爱恨情仇没有什么必然关系但是就很想向你们科普一下！这个特点最明显的在新月的葬礼，本来非常悲伤的情绪都已经给渲染上来了，生生被那个繁复的葬礼仪式给冷下去了，不知道作者究竟想渲染个怎样的氛围，神圣吗？那就只需要把那些诵唱的经文用简单易懂的文字描述出来，或是于无声处彰显力量，而不是用那些看起来非常蹩脚的阿拉伯文的音译大费周章地给读者介绍葬礼流程。其实很多处介绍穆斯林传统的描写都有这个弊病，所谓气氛破坏者，说的就是这个了。读者可以百度的东西，就不要和百度一样写得那么程式化，（不过为作者辩解一下，她创作的那个年代还没有百度）至少要贴合剧情，否则就好像一块贴纸，随便找了一块墙贴上去，尽管很好看，却与雪白的墙面相比十分突兀。你要想藏一朵花，就应该把它藏在花丛中，这才是正确的做法。