四级作文第一点第二点【一】
有时我会想，人类发明各种玩意儿，让生活越来越科技化，这种趋势无穷无尽，究竟有什么意义呢？我们非要穿千奇百怪的衣服吗？我们非要吃形形色色的食物吗？我们非要住豪华亮丽的大房子吗？我们把自己局限在一定的地理空间，忙忙碌碌耗费生命，就为了吃更好的穿更美的住更大的。而当更美味的东西摆在眼前只能随便吞两口赶着上班，更漂亮的衣服回到家也想赶快换掉，更大的房子绝大部分时间只待在睡觉那张床所占的的几平米地。我们是何苦呢？越是进步越带来单调和机械，我们作茧自缚却乐此不疲。
而在这个除了人没有什么东西是真实的世界里，仅存的一点真实是Abi用纸折的企鹅和Bing的一颗真心。Bing发现Abi的歌唱才华，鼓励她参加比赛。“达人秀”的门票很贵，普通人很难进入，有梦想的人拼命踩单车集足一千五百万点数才够资格。然而比赛操纵在一群人手里，他们不理会公平原则，挑选他们想要的人率先上台，上台前每人都必须喝下一杯饮料，以便更好操控。Bing用他哥哥的遗产买了票送给Abi，希望她能一展才华带给大家一些真实的感觉，不料她被设计成色情女星。Bing一怒之下砸了屏幕得到一块玻璃，带着它上了达人秀舞台，抵着喉咙向大家喊话，试图唤醒所有人的知觉，结果被当成一场激烈的表演而入选。而他自己，神勇的反抗只是换来更大的房间，一如既往的无聊生活。
消费主义笼罩所有人，除了娱乐，他们没有别的判断力，被动地接受一切信息。小胖男除了玩射击游戏，就是看大胃王节目为别人痛苦的吃相哈哈大笑。事实上我始终搞不明白这类娱乐节目的笑点在哪。过台湾综艺一度以整人为主题，艺人被整得越惨，节目就越火。打开视频网站，号称“笑人不偿命”的都是些人类摔跤、被狗咬、被车撞、掉水里、挂树上的镜头集锦。看这些画面我很难使用笑的表情，拜托，那得多疼！以别人的痛苦为乐，套用第一集的一句台词“这世界太扭曲了”！
四级作文第一点第二点【二】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn't afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people's clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn't put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can't provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级作文第一点第二点【三】
呀！谁让你扫地了啊！去去去！一边去！我来就行了！你一个小孩子家擦什么窗户！你的任务是学习！学习！懂不懂！妈妈在一旁抢过我的扫把和抹布，还不忘教训我几句。
天哪！我都几年级的学生了呀！还是不让干这不让干那的'！知不知道我在学校有多丢人吗！我向妈妈咆哮道。妈妈愣了一下，脸色渐渐变差，我立马意识到有一场暴风雨要来临了。
我说你这孩子怎么这样啊？你妈我是看不得你那受苦的样子好心帮你！呵，你还有理了你！我不管你了！说完妈妈走进了自己卧室，重重地关上了门，哦不，是重重地摔上了门。
那一声重重的摔门声，仿佛像一堵厚厚的墙，把我和妈妈隔离在了两个世界。我的心情也很差，也不管满是垃圾的地板和全是污渍的玻璃窗，一头扎进了沙发上，舒适地躺着。
妈妈，为什么你就不能理解我的心思呢？我想要做一个独立的孩子啊，为什么你就不知道呢……假如我是妈妈，我绝对不会这样爱自己的孩子的，唉……假如，我是妈妈……
假如，我是妈妈，我首先要做一个不溺爱自己孩子的妈妈。我要让自己的孩子学会独立，克服依赖家人的惯性，让他做一个独立的孩子。这样的话，以后遇到什么困难和挫折，他都能自己解决和克服，不会哭哭啼啼地喊着要爸爸妈妈。
假如，我是妈妈，其次我要做一个有创意感的妈妈。自己的孩子不爱学习，我不会强迫他去学习，但是我会让他在趣味中学会各种知识。自己的孩子不爱学习语文，我会亲手改制语文课本，把课本改制成趣味漫画书；不爱学习数学，我会自己烹饪数字饼干，把早餐改制成趣味数学早餐；不爱学习英语，我会把孩子最喜欢的抱枕绣上字母，改制成趣味英文抱枕。让孩子在趣味中学习，比在枯燥无味的学堂中的学习效率要高得多。
假如，我是妈妈，我还要做一个不限制孩子自由的妈妈。考试前夕，我不会强迫孩子努力地读、写、背，也不指望他能考出特别好的成绩，因为那样只会增加孩子的负担。如果时间允许的话，我会在考试前几天带着孩子到外游玩，让孩子好好地放松一下，把孩子的自由、快乐放在第一位。
啊！妈妈！妈妈！你听见了吗？我不想做笼中鸟！我要做翱翔的雄鹰！
啊！妈妈！我想大声地告诉你：请你放开你的双手，让我自己走！
四级作文第一点第二点【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文第一点第二点【五】
假如我是妈妈，我不会要求十分严格，功课不需要他（她）次次满分，能有90分或90以上就行了。考试也不需要他（她）每次考满分，只要有90分以上就好了，如果考不到，也没关系，只要是孩子尽了力就好。我也不会逼着孩子做任何事，只要是对孩子有好处的，他（她）愿意做就行了，但是就不要半途而废，不然我会伤心，会对他（她）失望的。
我也不是什么事都迁就着他（她），像叠被子，戴红领巾，红领巾脏了自己洗，要吃水果自己削。不过，孩子累了可以休息，我也会倒一杯水给孩子喝，放松放松，让他（她）健康成长。
假如我是妈妈，我一定不会让孩子感到孤独。孩子上学时可以带上家庭照，在向父母的时候可以拿出来看一看，就会有一种父母在身旁的感觉。我也不会让孩子受到同学的欺负，如果他（她）受到欺负，经调查确实是对方的错，我一定会跟那位同学讲一讲道理，要是实在不行，就跟老师反映，一定要让错的一方知道错误才行。
假如我是妈妈，我绝不会因为工作而不顾与孩子的约定，答应了孩子的事要尽自己的能力做好，不失约；假如我是妈妈，我绝对不会在陪孩子玩的时候做出一副很累，很疲倦，很没心情的样子；假如我是妈妈，我绝对不会忽略孩子内心的感受，从孩子内心的角度出发，做个体谅孩子的好妈妈。
假如我是妈妈，我会注重培养孩子的兴趣科，不会逼着他（她）去学自己不愿意学的东西，培养他（她）的长处，因为兴趣是最好的老师。
假如我是妈妈，学校布置的假期作业少的话，我会给孩子出一道或者是两道他（她）经常做错的题目。要是昨夜的数量中等，我不会布置作业给孩子做，不会让孩子有一种负担感，不会让孩子觉得像是坐牢一样，因为快乐才是开启知识宝库的钥匙。
假如我是妈妈，我不会将工作的烦恼带回家，我会把家里的烦恼留在工作岗位上。我不会将自己的脾气撒在孩子身上，把孩子当出气筒，让他（她）觉得自己没有了别人有的母爱。我要让孩子健康快乐地成长，尽情地绘画自己美妙的人生，用五彩的颜料给自己美妙的人生之画涂抹上鲜艳的色彩。
四级作文第一点第二点【六】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
四级作文第一点第二点【七】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
四级作文第一点第二点【八】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
