自从小兔上次输了,天天勤练跑步,练了一身好功夫。又去找小乌龟比赛。小乌龟眨了眨眼睛说:“好的吧,不过我们从湖的这一边到对岸的大树下,谁先到,就赢。”兔子不假思索地点了点头。
第二天,他们请来了山羊爷爷做裁判,只听:“嘭”的一声,随着山羊爷爷的发令枪响,比赛开始了。兔子像一支离弦的箭绕着湖边的小路飞奔而去,而乌龟却跳进了湖里,向对岸径直而去,山羊爷爷抚摸着胡子笑了。这时兔子拼命地向前冲,不敢有半点疏忽。快要到终点了,兔子加快了速度。忽然,它看到了乌龟已经笑眯眯的站在大树下等它了,小兔子怎么也弄不明白。于是它去问山羊爷爷,山羊爷爷笑着说:“做事要动脑子,光蛮干是不行的。”小兔子眨巴着红眼睛,似乎明白了什么。小朋友们,你们知道小兔明白了什么道理吗?
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Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______.
Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.
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In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years.
The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________.
Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.
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Nowadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life,ranging from __________to_____________.
The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,__________.
To conclude,____________are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may________.However,one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use,always being a master instead of slaving of them.
一天,小兔又到小乌龟家对小乌龟说:“我们再比一次赛跑,看看谁会赢。”小乌龟眼珠子骨碌一转说:“那好吧”。
他们一起来到山坡边,小乌龟对小兔说:“我们看谁先到山脚下谁就赢。”比赛开始了,小兔像风一样向终点冲去。小乌龟也赶紧把四肢和头都缩到鬼壳里咕噜咕噜地滚下山坡。滚到半山中小乌龟被一块大石头挡住了路,不能动了。连忙大喊救命。小兔听到了,连忙返回来救小乌龟。小乌龟得救了,它们同时跑向终点,还成为好朋友。
这个故事告诉我们当别人有困难时要互相帮助。
Recently, there is a popular saying: the world is so large that I want to have a look! As more and more people travel around during their holidays, tourists have brought large sum of money to the local people.
However, too many tourists also bring some problems to the local life. The most serious problem is the pollution caused by the uncivilized tourists. It’s reported that there were thousands of tons of rubbish left after the flag-raising ceremony on Oct. 1st. The uncivilized tourists left their rubbish wherever they go, polluting the local environment. Another problem is the traffic jam caused by so many tourists.
Tourist can promote the economic development of the local areas, but the pollution caused by those uncivilized tourists has brought severe problems. The local tourist authority should set up relative laws to protect the environment of the local areas, and every tourist obey the laws and help to make the places of tourist more beautiful!
四级英语很快就要到来了,英语是占据重要的部分,快来看看下面的范文及写作指导吧。
下面请看一篇漫画式命题的作文预测题:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should express your views on the impact of air pollution. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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The Impact of Air Pollution
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. In the cartoon we can see the air pollution is so serious that the earth can't bear it.
What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people's living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great amount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people's life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lung cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
英语漫画作文写作指导
第一、读图审题
四级漫画作文中的漫画通常反映一个社会现象或生活哲理,要求考生根据自己对漫画的理解来写作。因此,要写好四级漫画作文,审题格外重要。考生在下笔之前要仔细看漫画,弄清漫画的寓意,这是文章切题的保证。此外,在本次四级考试的三道写作题中,Directions部分都给出了写作内容的大致方向,这也为考生把握漫画寓意提供了帮助。下面笔者就来逐一梳理2013年6月四级作文的三幅漫画及其传达的寓意。
第二、谋篇布局
在把握文章的主旨之后,考生就可以构思整篇文章的架构了。四级漫画作文的写作可以分为下面三个段落。
第一段:开门见山,简要描述一下漫画内容,并指出漫画的寓意。描述漫画内容是为了揭示其中的寓意,是手段而不是目的,所以描述要简洁明快,一般来说一句话足矣。需要提醒考生的是,写作的Directions部分虽然给出了大致的写作主题,但是也要求考生对漫画进行简要描述,因此考生切不可抛开漫画内容直接展开议论。
第二段:表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的重心所在。比如,就第一道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段阐述阅读文学作品的重要性;就第二道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述为什么凡事必须从小事做起;就第三道写作题目而言,考生应在第二段论述掌握基本技能的重要性。
第三段:指出漫画的寓意对大学生的教育意义,或者提出解决问题的建议。考生需要注意的是,结尾段一般并不需要实质性的分析,其主要作用是总结和升华,使文章结构完整。所以结尾段的写作要简明扼要,点到即止。
第三、论证方法
漫画作文的\'第二段要表达考生对漫画寓意的看法,这是文章的核心段落,也是作文字数达到要求的关键。因此,考生在这一段要浓墨重彩,写深、写透。在写这一段时,考生要尽量摆事实、讲道理,避免空泛的议论。针对这一核心段落,笔者在此推荐以下三种展开议论的常用方法,希望对考生有所启发。
1.条分缕析
在写作第二段时,考生可以从2~3个方面对观点展开论述,这种写法可使文章显得层次清楚、条理清晰。例如,本次四级作文第一道题目的第二段需要阐述阅读文学作品的重要性,考生就可以从以下两个方面展开:第一,相对于电子媒体,文学阅读更能培养人的想象力;第二,阅读文学作品能够帮助我们更好地了解社会。请参考下面的范文。
There wasa time when children could relish (欣赏/ 也可以使用appreciate 替换 literature. But childrentoday can enjoy the sounds and action on a TV or computer screen. “So why bother reading?” some ask. The reasonis obvious: It enriches our imagination. When we read apiece of literature, we are living the life of RobinHood or starting an adventure with Tom Sawyer. In addition, literature is the mirror of society,whether it be poetry, drama or fiction. We know thesociety better through literature.
2.举例论证
如果漫画所传达的是抽象的人生哲理,那么考生在论述时最好能举出具体的事例,尽量避免空洞的说教。比如,就本次四级作文第二道题目而言,考生可以在第二段中举出一些成功人士如何从小事做起的例子。笔者下面提供的范文中用到的是哈兰·桑德斯上校从一个小吃店做起,最后缔造出遍布全球的肯德基快餐帝国的例子,用以证明只有从小事做起,才能成就大事。请看下面的范文。
Everything is smallbefore it is big. A good example is KFC. In 1930 Colonel Harland Sanders beganserving food to his service station customers in Corbin, a city in Kentucky. He fried chicken in his own kitchen andperfected his secret recipe there. From the small roadside eatery, he went on to build an empire of fast food.
3.类比论证
如果漫画中的寓意不容易通过具体的事例来证明,那么考生还可以使用类比论证的方法,即通过打比方来论证一个抽象的道理。比如,对于本次四级作文的第三道题目,考生可以在第二段中用学习打篮球的过程来打比方。学习打篮球时,只有先学会了投球、运球、传球这些基本技能,才能进一步学习高难度的技能。以此类推,无论做任何事情,只有掌握了基本的技能,才可能取得更大的成功。此外,考生还可以举出统计数字,用具体的研究结果来证明论点。请看下面的范文。
Simple as they mayseem, basic skills serve as the first link in the chain of success. Thisis analogous to learning to play basketball. If shooting, dribbling and passing are not mastered,learning advanced skills will become difficult, if notimpossible. A growing body of research has also documented that such basicskills as reading, writing and computing are highlycorrelated with success later in life. A 2012 study surveyed 300 CEOs ofFortune 500 companies and found that 87% attributed part of their success tothe basic skills they learned in primary school.
自从龟兔第一次赛跑兔子输给乌龟后,兔子很不服。它给乌龟发了一份挑战书,说还要再比一次,时间定在星期五。乌龟收到挑战书后,表示同意。
到了比赛那天,裁判员小猴发令,“呯”一声响,兔子像离弦的箭一样冲了出去 ,而乌龟却在后面慢慢地爬。兔子想:乌龟那么慢还来比赛,上次因为我的疏忽让它捡了个便宜,这次它一定输。兔子越想越高兴。
兔子正高兴的时候,它跑到了小河边。原来这条小河是干的,因为前几天下过雨,河水涨满了。它想到自己不会游泳,怎么办呢?一定要有人帮我带我过去才可以呀,它只能在河边等着。
过了几分钟,乌龟来了,兔子上前一步说:“:我不会游泳,你能带我过去吗?”乌龟二话没说,就把兔子带过了小河。兔子感动地说:“咱们一起走吧!”乌龟说:“我没你跑得快呀!”兔子说:“没关系,你帮了我,我等你慢慢走。”于是,它们一前一后往终点走去。
走了半个小时那样,忽然,兔子听到了一声“救命啊!”兔子回头一看,原来乌龟掉进了洞里,下面有许多尖尖的石头,它的一条腿也受伤了。兔子把乌龟从洞里救出来,背起它,飞快地向终点跑去。
到了终点,小猴要发奖了,一看它们一起到终点,不知怎么给它们发奖牌。河马说:“不如这样,给它们俩各发一块奖牌吧?”所有动物都同意河马的建议,给它们各发了一个奖牌。他俩高兴地笑了,还成了好朋友。
我想大家都听过龟兔赛跑的故事吧!敏捷的兔子和缓慢的乌龟进行赛跑,但是兔子因为在路上偷懒睡着了,输给了乌龟。
比赛结束后,兔子不服气,强烈要求再赛一次。乌龟眨眨眼睛说:“这次路线有我来订。”兔子轻蔑地说:“不管你订什么样的`路线,只要我不睡觉,就一定能嬴得比赛。
第二次比赛开始了,兔子带头冲出,奔驰了一阵子,已经遥遥领先了乌龟。这时眼前出现了一条宽阔的河流。而比赛的终点就在河对面不远处的大树下。兔子呆坐在那里,一时不知道怎么办。乌龟却一路跚跚而来,跳入河里,游到对岸,继续爬行,到达了终点。兔子只能眼睁睁地看着乌龟又一次嬴得了比赛。
虽然兔子路地快,但第一次比赛输在了骄傲自大偷懒睡觉上。而这一次却输在了只看到了乌龟跑地慢的短处,却没有看到乌龟会游泳的长处。又一次输给了聪明的乌龟。
不要只看到别人的缺点,也要看清楚别人的优点和自己的不足才是最重要的。
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