无锡中考 英语 作文 2024【一】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
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第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
无锡中考 英语 作文 2024【二】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
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第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
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第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
无锡中考 英语 作文 2024【三】
今天微风习习，天气怡人。我们六年级的同学来到了无锡的灵山胜境游玩。
为了锻炼同学们的体质，磨炼同学们的意志，学校决定举行“5公里徒步行”活动。当车开到指定的地点时，我们便下车开始了徒步行。刚开始走时，我们充满了活力，走得十分轻松。可过了十几分钟，我就感觉有点累了，脚步慢了下来。又过了十几分钟，我的脚酸痛起来，腿像灌了铅似的，每迈一步都沉重无比。我摘下帽子，擦了擦头上的汗，默默地给自己加油打气，振作精神，继续前行……
好像又走了好久，我们终于走到了灵山胜境。刚进门，我便看到了矗立在远方的一尊大佛，那就是灵山胜境的标志——灵山大佛。我仔细地端详起这尊大佛：这大佛慈眉善目，胸前挂着一串佛珠，还披着一身袈裟，让人觉得十分神圣庄重。再向前走去，映入眼帘的是一朵巨大的钢制莲花。莲花的中央还站立着一尊佛像，那就是佛教的创始人释迦牟尼。莲花周围的水池里喷出了数丈高的喷泉，形态各异，互相交错，漂亮极了！游客和同学们发出阵阵惊叹，纷纷拿出手机来拍下这壮观的一幕。
我们继续前行，不知不觉便来到了梵宫前。踏进梵宫，我立刻感觉整个世界似乎都安静下来，连空气中都弥漫着一股庄严肃穆的味道。我们步入了一个大厅，眼前顿时昏暗下来，空气中散发着浓浓的檀木香味。我抬眼一看：这里雕梁画栋，左右边的墙壁上刻满了精美的\'壁画，内容丰富，栩栩如生；上方的墙壁四周都是形态各异的飞天。它们有的神态庄严，有的手持花篮，有的腰挎琵琶……真的是五花八门，色彩斑斓。最美丽的还是前方墙壁上的内容。那墙壁上刻着一尊大佛，大佛周围的花纹在望远镜的作用下精致的令人啧舌，那一丝一毫的花纹我都能看得一清二楚，真是太美了！刚刚还说说笑笑的人群瞬间安静了下来，仿佛都已沉浸在这种氛围之中了。
之后，我们还去摸了摸佛手，欣赏了十八罗汉的铜像，玩得不亦乐乎。
这次的春游不但锻炼了我们的体质，而且让我们领略了博大精深的佛教文化，真是一次特殊的春游！
无锡中考 英语 作文 2024【四】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
无锡中考 英语 作文 2024【五】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
无锡中考 英语 作文 2024【六】
昨天我们到了无锡三国城和水浒城，我们先是到水浒城那里买票。大人每位120元，我只需要买半票60元就可以进去了。
我们先是到梁山码头那里，看到了好几艘大船，那里还有一块大石头上面写着“水泊梁山”四个大字，我和妈妈还有奶奶在那里拍了好多照片。接着我们又来到了一条街，街的两旁边有卖古代兵器仿制品的商店。我们还上了城墙，城墙上有许多刚发芽的柳枝。城墙的两面插了好多面旗子，旗子上都有一个“宋”字，这个“宋”字在水浒里就代表了宋江。走了很长时间，我们都不觉得肚子有点饿了，所以就在武大郎烧饼店买了5个烧饼，味道还真的不错。表演的时间到了，表演的地方人可真多呀，真是人山人海呀。因为我太矮了所以只能站在凳子上看了。杂技表演的节目有好几个呢，我最喜欢的就是表演者站上一个像翘翘板一样的道具上，只是下面是一个圆筒。人不但要保持平衡还要把翘翘板上的碗一个个的送到头顶上，接着还有杯子，最后是汤匙都要准确的落到杯子里。这些以前都只在电视上看过的，真是太厉害了。
我们又来到了三国城，第一站我们经过了火烧赤壁的模型版现场。好多木船都排列整齐像是要二军开战了，这个场景让我想到了诸葛亮如何用妙计以小胜多。然后我们来到了吴王宫，就是刘备的宫殿，上去的台阶好多哦，感觉很雄伟。里面有好多穿古装的人在拍照，还有一些人在弹奏古代乐器。三国人物结义的桃园我们也看到了，里面人很多桃树。最后我们到了三国城的出口，在离出口不远的\'地方有石头制成的三国兵马，分别有三个国家的人物和旗子，我和爸爸还在那里拍了照片呢。
我们都走得非常累了，离吃中饭的时间早就过了好长了，所以就从三国城的出口直接出去了。吃好中饭我们还去了妈妈的学校，妈妈说已经毕业这么久一点也没有变。这次旅游真的很好玩呢。
