雅思大作文8.14(雅思大作文6分标准)

雅思大作文8.14(雅思大作文6分标准)

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雅思大作文8.14(雅思大作文6分标准)

雅思大作文8.14【一】

这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。

在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。

引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....

引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..

【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.

【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...

雅思大作文8.14【二】

??电影唐山大地震观后感

妈妈单位发了几张《唐山大地震》的电影票,因为妈妈要参加市里的培训班,不让请假,所以我就和哥哥的同学,还有姑妈一起去图书馆的放映厅去看这个大片。

这个故事是讲:在唐山大地震中,有一个女孩她和她的弟弟同时被压在了巨大的石板下时,当时只能救一个人,这时她的妈妈选择了弟弟。这个可怜的'小女孩在坚硬的石板的压迫下,还要承受被亲生母亲抛弃的伤痛,为此,这个小女孩恨了她的妈妈。

还好,在幸运之神的眷顾下,这个小女孩活了下来,被一对好心的解放军夫妇领养,并且健康地长成了一个漂亮懂事的好女孩。她的养父母为了让她去寻找亲生母亲,给她留了一大笔钱,这是一种多么伟大的高尚的情怀呀!

在汶川地震时,这个女孩积极地参加了救援工作,无意之中遇到了她的弟弟。到了弟弟家,她的亲生母亲跪在地上,请求她的宽恕。女儿通过这次汶川救援工作,、理解了母亲当时无奈的选择,原谅了她的母亲。

这部片子带给我的震撼不仅只有这些,还有那些在影片中,满身淤泥的解放军叔叔们,他们在抗震救灾的过程中,奋不顾身,英勇拼搏,有的伤了,有的还奉献出了自己的生命,却从没发出怨言,这些人更值得我们尊敬、爱戴。

自然灾害是可怕的,但只要我们万众一心、众志成城,就一定能战胜困难,赢得胜利!

灾难只会让我们更加团结,团结必定使我们战胜灾难!

雅思大作文8.14【三】

阅读一直是我的强项,中国学生一般都是阅读很强哈,呵呵。在开始复习的前几天,我做了三套真题,分别错了9个,4个,3个,然后我就停下不做了,我想做真题主要是适应雅思考试的方式。接下来的日子,有空的话我就做做《雅思阅读真经》,但总共做了不到10篇。在最后一天做了一套真题,错了6个。考试的时候感觉还不错,但结果不是很理想,没有达到7。5的目标。

建议:1,即使是短期复习,也要尽力去适应雅思的方式,因为雅思很多是细节的题,所以要注意阅读的技巧(关于技巧,其他牛人已经说了很多了)

2,在最后复习阶段,一定要尽全力提高阅读速度(我也知道这不是说提高就提高的,但有这样的意识再加上一些对自己有帮助的方法,还是会有效果的)。我有个建议,大家在阅读的时候不要在心里默读,尽量做到一看到这个单词就反应过来它的意思,然后马上跳过;可以在复习的时候,每次做阅读的时候都这样训练。

雅思大作文8.14【四】

写作我也一直不差,因为以前背过新概念的一些文章。雅思的其实想要提高也不是难事,我买了一本《雅思万能八分作文》,还不错,里面有很多句子值得借鉴;然后我看了一些从3G上下载的范文,又从里面挑了一些句子和表达;在最后一天的时候,把我挑的句子和表达都罗列在一起,大概也就50条左右,我背了一下,接着就计时练了一次,结果在规定时间内直接写超了,TASK1写了200多,TASK2写了350,当时把我吓了一跳,因为我怕考试的时候按这样的思路写这么多时间会不够。所以在考试的时候,我写的比较慢,控制好节奏,每句话都是想好了再下笔的,最后字数差不多。

建议:1,一定要看一定数目的

雅思大作文8.14【五】

2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?

3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?

4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.

7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.

雅思大作文8.14【六】

选好词汇之后,就选择搭配,但搭配的组合一定要与自己的观点相符:

influences我们通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分为commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代,所以句子如下:

Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.

这就是将简单句进行华丽变身的方法啦~最后环球君要给大家出个题目哦!

本周考题

Community service is helpful for both students and society.

这句话老师的扩句版本为

Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.

雅思大作文8.14【七】

Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.

这里的shop and spend就是复合谓语结构,但是到目前为止,这仍旧是一个简单句,我们继续丰富它。

雅思大作文8.14【八】

此类段落不论字数多少,都给人空虚的感觉。考生往往为了凑足篇幅而“不择手段”。表面看来扩展了许多,但仔细永远只有一个意思。不得不让考官觉得即单调又啰嗦。

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