作文《my friends and i 》【一】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
作文《my friends and i 》【二】
One day a crow stood on a branch near his nest and felt very happy with the meat in his mouth. At that time, a fox saw the crow with the meat, so he swallowed and eagerly thought of a plan to get the meat. However, whatever the fox said to the crow, the crow just kept silent. Until the fox thought highly of the crow's beautiful voice, the crow felt flattered and opened his mouth to sing. As soon as the meat fell down to the ground, the fox took the meat and went into his hole.
有一天,一只乌鸦站在窝旁的.树枝上嘴里叼着一片肉，心里非常高兴。这时候，一只狐狸看见了乌鸦，馋得直流口水，非常想得到那片肉。但是，无论狐狸说什么，乌鸦就是不理睬狐狸。最后，狐狸赞美乌鸦的嗓音最优美，并要求乌鸦唱几句让他欣赏欣赏。乌鸦听了狐狸赞美的话，得意极了，就唱起歌来。没想到，肉一掉下来，狐狸就叼起肉，钻回了洞
作文《my friends and i 》【三】
你好！
广东的生活你现在一定习惯了，对吧！
最近我都快烦了，之前脑抽和自己打赌，好不我好像快赌输了。脑细胞真不够，左思右想，冥思苦想和日思夜想，天天想还是找不到DA。是吧，你一定刚开始就知道我一定矛盾导致“挂”。我说和自己打赌时你说“厉害了”。这说明什么！哦的天！如此“帅气”的我快要变“衰气”了，我之前认为我一定能以流星划过星空的时间思考，眨眨眼的速度回答的。可都没有。我现在以360度无限回头想的.速度去想，还没找到DA回答个屁！L极度怀疑人生中。
烦心事那么多，故事那么长，即便心中有千言万语想说，可真要说的时候，又哽住了。I，我知道你近来烦心的事比我还多，所以我在QQ上也沉默了。毕竟你们都那么忙我还去打扰就真不对了。哎I，真的觉得Ta很烦就点击“删除好友”，别一整天困自己在那些琐事里。你管那是不是你的风格干什么，先自己轻松再说，一整天因Ta的“神经式烦人”而烦心，你不累我看着也累，替你累，在学校我想的都是你们啊。
一群不让人省心的“娃”。让我一整天瞎操心。没办法唉，遇到了你们，我是得有幸的“操心”的。当初你和Ta反向走时你不一样“脚步自带风，眼泪无一滴”吗！
为你等待晴空的雨宝
20XX年9月28日
