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今天上午是我游泳初级班的最后一堂课。上完这节课,我就光荣"毕业"了。所以在最后一节课,我既欢呼雀跃又有些许留恋。刚开始来到这个泳池学习的点点滴滴的画面不断在我的脑海中涌现。
起初我们的王教练给我们制定了一套学习步骤,一要喜欢水;二要胆子放大,在水中时身体保持平直,头看上方;三要双腿上下蹬水。我们按照教练的指示一步步地学习,有了心里的.踏实感,我不怕安全问题了,经过反复练习,我就渐渐地掌握了仰泳的技能。
从最初的不谙水性到现在的如鱼得水,我收获很多。今天这节课也是我盼望已久的,我终于可以充分展示这些天的苦练成果。王教练看到我在泳池里轻松自如的游着,也深感欣慰。妈妈十分羡慕,也产生了想要学习游泳的念头。
时光飞逝,最后一堂课即将接近尾声,可是我依旧对这个游泳池恋恋不舍,于是我要求妈妈再给我报个提高班,妈妈欣然答应了。
今天的我很有成就感,同时也明白了一个道理:只要功夫深,铁杵磨成针。
当新学期来临时,许多学生对新生活表现得很兴奋。在大学,新生快乐地享受着自由。在接下来的四年里,他们希望过着高中描绘的'美好生活。但事实是,大学生活中有很多东西要学。
First, the major knowledge occupies the most important role. As a student, learning knowledge is their job, while many students focus on playing cellphone in the class, or just sleep. They lose interest in studying when they come to the free environment. Mastering the professional skill helps them to be competitive. The sad thing is that most of them can't realize it.
首先,专业知识占据着最重要的角色。作为一名学生,学习知识是他们的工作,而很多学生在课堂上玩手机,或者睡觉。当他们来到自由的环境后对学习失去了兴趣。掌握专业技能帮助他们提高竞争力,可悲的是,大多数人没有意识到这一点。
Second, as there is much free time, they can make use of it and gain the valuable experience. Students can join some clubs to develop more interest, or find part-time jobs. It is better than to stay in the dorm and play computer games all the time.
第二,由于空闲时间多,他们可以充分利用好这些时间,并从中获得宝贵的经验。学生可以参加一些活动来发展更多的兴趣爱好,或找份兼职工作。比呆在宿舍玩电脑游戏好多了。
A lot of students feel lost in the campus, because they don't plan campus life well. The things you learn will make you different in the future.
很多学生因为没有计划好校园生活在所以迷失了。所学到的东西会让你在未来有所作为。
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
Many people lose their lives when they meet the accident in the water, so it is important to learn swimming.
I have made up my mind and must finish this task.
暑假来了,我决定学习游泳,因为天气太热了,我可以让自己感到清凉点,更重要的.是,我想掌握一门技能和保护自己。
许多人失去生命,当他们遇到发生在水里的事故,所以学习游泳是很重要的。
我已经下定决心,必须完成这一任务。
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