四级作文阅读老师【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
四级作文阅读老师【二】
敬爱的老师：
我们要毕业了，回忆过去，刚进校园时，迎接您的，是一张张懵懂的笑脸，是一个个矮小的身影。迎接我们的，是一个甜蜜的微笑，是一双温暖的手，是一双能看见未来的明亮的眼睛。柔柔的春风吹过我的脸庞，拂过我的\'心头，使我有一种说不出来的感觉。转眼间，五个春天都已经过去，您甜蜜的微笑早已远去，温暖的双手已爬满了皱纹，但我永远不会忘记，我们在校园里的点点滴滴，我人生中获得的第一笔财富。我们在一起的时光，有欢笑，也有泪水，有喜悦，也有悲伤，有安逸，也有劳累。
在这欢乐的时光里，您给予了我知识，给予了我表扬，当然，也给予了我不少的批评。
记得有一次，您布置的家庭作业，不仅是在我们的知识范围之外的，还是在我们以往的家庭作业的数量中，最多的。虽然您中午就已经布置完了家庭作业，但我却还是一样都没有做完。突然，我的鼻子有了一种酸酸的、刺痛刺痛的感觉。糟了，我要哭了。不行，我可不能在同学们的面前失态!我忍住了。回到家后，我努力又快速地写作业，写作业。一个小时后，妈妈回来了，问我我的家庭作业写完了没有，我沮丧地摇了摇头，说道：还没有。有一个小时后，爸爸回来了，又问我的作业写完了没有，我带着哭腔喊道：没有。你们烦不烦啊！今天的作业很多哎！半小时后，主厨妈妈大声叫道：吃饭了！我没有理睬妈妈，继续写我的作业。有半小时后，爸爸来到我的房间，轻声说道：孩子，快去吃饭吧，吃完了我好洗碗。我这才妥协：那好吧。我快速跑去饭厅，三下两下扒完了饭，丢下饭碗，又飞奔回我的房间写作业。半个小时后，我终于把作业写完了。第二天上午，我惺忪着睡眼，上完了整整两节课，共有一百二十多分钟！第三节课下课后，您亲自来到教室，厉声喝道：刘雨，来我办公室一趟！我又害怕又疑惑：为什么要叫我去办公室呢？还这么凶，难道我犯什么错误了吗？
虽然我很恐惧，但我还是鼓起了勇气，跟着您去了。到了办公室，我捏紧了拳头，紧咬着牙，紧张的脸都红了。我用颤抖的语气，很小声地说道：老老师，有有什么事事情吗？您用尽量温柔的声音说道：昨天的家庭作业，你写了好久？呃很久。我还是颤抖地说道。您继续用柔和的声音对我说：那字呢，字，写得怎么样？说实话，您用这么温柔的语气来向我说话，我还真得有一点点受宠若惊。我答道：字？写写得应该还还可以吧。因为昨天的家庭作业实在太多太多，所以连我自己都不知道我的字究竟写得怎么样。忽然，您改变了那令我受宠若惊的温柔的语调，大声地，还带着一点讽刺的语气向我吼道：还可以！呵呵，确实还可以！您把还可以这三个字说得很重。您拿出我的语文家庭本，对我说：你自己看看，你的字到底写得怎样！您翻开我的家庭本，让我看。我自卑似的说道：我我写得写的一点都不好！大声点儿！我写得字不好！这就对了嘛。|以后，你每天中午都来我的办公室练字，直到你练好了为止！听到没有！听听到了！从今往后，我每天中午都到您的办公室练字，最后终于把字练好了。
谢谢您，老师。要不是您，我写的字，肯定是全班第一。（补充一下，是全班倒数第一。）
老师，您就像是蜡烛，燃烧了自己，点亮了我们的人生和未来；您就像是勤劳的园丁，而我们就像是娇嫩的花朵，您不辞辛劳的照顾我们；您就像是蜜蜂，我们就是小花，您帮助我们播撒希望和知识，让我们能够更快、更好的成长。老师，您辛苦了，我爱您！
五年级:刘雨欣
四级作文阅读老师【三】
Dear Mary,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates wore fashionableclothes, but you couldn\'t afford them so you felt very depressed. There are dif-ferent views on people\'s clothes. The followings are my ideas:
Firstly, you shouldn\'t put too much emphasis on physical appearance.
Remember that the most important task for you today is to concentrate on yourstudies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when youcome out first in your examinations.
Secondly, you should understand that it is a fine virtue to live in fru-gality. Just as a famous saying goes, Frugality is the mother of virtue.
Since your family can\'t provide you with enough money to buy fashionableclothes, it is all the more necessary for you to try to lighten the financialburden of your family. And you will find the virtue of frugality benefit youa lot in your future life.
I hope you understand what I mean. Hope you will take a positive attitudetowards life and will be happy again when you read my letter.
Yours,
Anne
四级作文阅读老师【四】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
