潘赟作文课有四级吗【一】
今天，我们在多功能厅观看了开学第一课的节目。它的全名叫“开学第一课-幸福”。
节目一开始，首先是由一些小朋友唱《幸福在哪里这首歌》，它让我们进入了一系列的思考中：幸福是什么？幸福在哪里？我们幸福吗？
三个主持人上台了，他们讲了幸福的含义。第一节课的铃声响了，班长和老师将这节课的小主人公--刘浩请上了台。他的眼睛看不见，却忠爱弹钢琴，从4岁开始练电子琴，7岁练钢琴，虽然看不到这美丽的世界，却仍充满自信，坚持练琴。他的妈妈也在牛皮纸上用针为小刘浩扎盲文五线谱。听了这个故事，我和在场的同学们一样，潸然泪下。幸福是什么？幸福就是坚持做自己喜欢的事情。
然而，让我最难忘的一件事要数第二节课时了，在重庆的一所小学，一个20多岁的老师走进了同学们的生活。在一次排节目的时间中，他决定教这里的孩子们现代舞，同学们十分喜欢这个舞蹈，也更喜欢这个老师。结果，在今天，他们却要离开这个老师，他们十分不舍，哭了。我们也在内心中被感动着。这让我想起了从前，一位实习老师来到我们班，她和我们相处得十分融洽，在她走时，我们都哭了。我终于发现了一些幸福的秘密。幸福在哪里？那就是：和自己喜欢的人在一起，就会快乐、幸福。
这次节目让我知道了幸福来之不易，我们应当珍惜眼前这份幸福。我们幸福吗？我们又不是盲童，也不是穷苦的孩子，我们拥有着无比浓郁的幸福。但是，我们也不能任性，要帮助别人。实际上，如果你帮助了别人，你会到别人尝不到的快乐。因此，我们要坚强、自信。就像谢娜姐姐说的：“只要你今天超过昨天，你就是第一”。
潘赟作文课有四级吗【二】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
潘赟作文课有四级吗【三】
每逢新学年的开始，《开学第一课》都是广大中小学生必上的一课。法国雕塑家罗丹曾说过这样一句话：“在我们的生活当中，不是缺少美，而是缺少发现美的眼睛。”通过这一课不仅让我们发现美，还学会去探索美，创造美，传递美。其实美就在我们身边，只是我们缺少一双发现美的眼睛。
吴斌这个名字可能大家并不陌生，短短几天的时间，这个名字就已传遍了各地的大街小巷。他为什么会有这样高的知名度呢？那是因为他用大爱温暖了每个人的心。他的举动，让所有人都为之震撼。在危难关头，镇定自若，忍受巨大疼痛，竭力地停下车并打开双闪灯，他仅用了短短45秒，就挽救了24名乘客。他倒下了，他再也没有醒来……“飞来的横祸”将这个美满的家庭打得支离破碎。让这个家庭丧失了欢乐，驱走了美满。让十七岁的女儿永远失去了父爱，让他的妻子和女儿面对着残酷的现实。对于他的妻子和女儿来说他是一个残忍的人，也是一个无私的人，但是她们又怎能忍心责怪他的残忍呢？她们只能牢记他的无私、他的爱。“一座城送走一个人，天是灰的；一个人感动一座城，心是亮的。”这是多么感人的一句话啊。他走了，他走进了每个人的心中。虽然他离开了我们，但是他还留在这个世界。因为大爱，这个美满的家庭牺牲了……吴斌这个名字已成为烙印，烙在了每个人的心里。
正是有了像吴斌这样的人，世界才变得更加温暖……
奥运健儿们和谭晶等诸多明星也加盟其中，精彩的节目不胜枚举。寓教于乐的方式让我们感同身受，让我感受到更多的是感动。美无处不在，其实美就在我们身边……
潘赟作文课有四级吗【四】
梦想，这是一个美好而伟大的词汇，它是一种神奇的力量，指引我们一步步地走向成功。当我们迷惘徘徊的时候，它指引我们找到正确的方向；当我们失败的时候，它给我们勇气；当我们跌倒时，它给我们信心……
小时候，很想看看天有多高，幻想着在太空游走，想去看看大海，幻想着游过海洋，想有一双翅膀，幻想着飞过天际，天天幻想着要赚大钱……梦想各种各样，很纯洁，很美妙。每个人都有一个梦想，但是梦想虽美，却要付出很多的努力……
今天20：00同学们准时收看了《开学第一课》，今年的主题是“乘着梦想的翅膀”。今年来了很多“老师”，他们当中有的人并非像星星一样闪耀，甚至平凡得不能再平凡，但是他们一样有一个美丽的梦想，他们朝着梦想努力奋斗，迎来的是美丽的彩虹……
第一堂课“有梦就有动力”。十年前，杨利伟首飞当天，她只是一个坐在电视机前的小女孩，但她在心中埋下了梦的`种子：冲出大气层，去看看太空那个神秘的世界。十年后，靠着自己持之以恒的努力，小女孩成为我国的一位女航天员，并首次在太空授课，她就是——王亚平。她鼓励我们：“梦想就像宇宙中的星辰，看似遥不可及，但只要努力，一定能够触摸得到！”
无论是追梦过程中收获的美好，还是帮助别人实现梦想的喜悦，都是梦想的精彩，在追梦道路上，每一段旅程都蕴藏着美丽的风景。
梦想的实现并非一朝一夕，追求梦想的道路上需要付出努力和坚持、汗水，甚至泪水，不抛弃、不放弃
那是一次学校举办的朗诵比赛，老师选了我代表班级参加，我的心里说不出的高兴，但是练习却是不容易的，每天早上或许有的同学还在睡梦中我就起来读稿子了，晚上同学们做好作业睡觉了，我还在背稿子，谁知道，在这重要的几天了，我竟然感冒了，快要说不出话来了，我真的很想放弃，让老师重新选一个同学参加，但是这个机会是来之不易的，失去了就不可能再有了，我不断的告诉自己要坚持，不能放弃，于是，我又振作了起来，每天多喝水，不能说话我就在心里度和背，没过几天嗓子就好了，而我的稿子又背得滚瓜烂熟了，再由老师指导指导就不成问题了，结果在这次比赛中，我得了第一名，给班级争了荣誉，也给自己争了口气。梦想是一种不竭的动力，让你不断燃烧内心的小宇宙，激发对美好生生不息的渴望，这种力量，让你无惧风雨、无畏风险，不断前进。
梦想是需要去坚持和努力的，有梦想就不要怕痛。
潘赟作文课有四级吗【五】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
潘赟作文课有四级吗【六】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
潘赟作文课有四级吗【七】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
