云南2017英语作文中考【一】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
云南2017英语作文中考【二】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
云南2017英语作文中考【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
云南2017英语作文中考【四】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
云南2017英语作文中考【五】
今年夏天，妈妈带我去云南旅游，刚下火车到了昆明，天空当中就出现了罕见的两条彩虹欢迎我们，我一下子就喜欢上了昆明。
我们先跟团去了石林玩。在往石林的途中，我发现一个很奇怪的现象，我们经过的路周围的山上不像我们这边山上，山上的植物种类特别多，有的时候还会发现有一大片的仙人掌。我还发现了山上有些人在攀岩，问了导游才知道原来那不是攀岩，而是上山采草药的当地人，有的人年龄都很大了还上山采药，所以云南十八怪中有“老太太爬树比猴快”的怪事。那个导游说：“我们今天先去小石林，下午再去大石林。”所以我们先去小石林绕了一圈，去了观景台看了一下就去吃午餐了。导游说：“团队餐等于减肥餐。”把大家吓了一跳，结果吃的还可以。在导游介绍后我明白了，石林是全国5A级风景区，是喀斯特地貌的精华，我想象着自己是一只小鲸，可以在石林中游来游去。进入石林给我很多震撼的就是那些奇形怪状的石头，有的像小老鼠啃面包，有的像阿诗玛，有的像剑直穿云霄，还有的像汹涌的海浪，我一口气走过最狭窄的小道到达最高点的观景亭，回头看石林的全貌，感觉自己真的像是在游泳的小鲸，特别自在。虽然游人是很多，但是在石林里，我还是发现了很多的彝族人，他们都是称呼为“阿黑哥”或是“阿诗玛”，他们在跳大三弦舞，我还在大三弦琴上弹了一把呢。
回来的车上，妈妈给我讲解喀斯特地貌形成的原因，我一边想着石林形成的过程，一边不舍地离开了石林，希望有一天还可以再来。
