珠海中考英语作文范文【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
珠海中考英语作文范文【二】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
珠海中考英语作文范文【三】
我对世界上的神秘的地方充满好奇，大海，是一个美丽而另人向往的地方，终于，在一个假期，我十分幸运的来到了珠海，那里是一个海边城市，街道上干净得没有一丝灰尘。
天蒙蒙亮，我们并向着大海出发。
我见过江边白色的雾，在书中看过峰峦雄伟的泰山那连绵不断的云雾，而这儿的雾却从没看过。
大雾像是屏障，好像平空置身在雾海里，心头飘荡着空虚而渺小的感觉，几个陌生的面孔，正在海边玩，不知道为什么，让我分外亲切起来，这儿的雾，实在是对珠海的一种点缀。失去了它就失去了一半的美，真所谓：“迷离景色，分外动人”之句，美，真是美得无法形容。
不知为什么，天空下起了蒙蒙细雨，让海边更加美丽，雨点儿一个劲的落下，无论是淅沥的下，还是哗啦啦的下，不论是嚎啕雷雨，还是蒙蒙细雨，春雨，急雨，都是那么美丽。
雨停了，太阳升起来了，瞧，那儿是什么？是彩虹，在太阳照耀下，闪耀光芒，眺望大海，即使你站在那无比高的山上也看不到边，让人看不到哪里是水，哪里是天，瞧，太阳照耀下，大海碧波荡漾，多少种蓝颜色呀：深的、浅的。蓝得无法形容，好像只有画家才能描绘出这么多种蓝颜色来呢。
太阳由红变亮，光芒四射，波浪渐渐汹涌起来，刚才还温顺得像小猫似的大海顿时变得这么汹涌了。
是啊，珠海就是一个变化无常的精灵，让人捉摸不透。它瞬息万变、喜怒无常，但对我来说那儿仍是一个美丽的世界！
珠海中考英语作文范文【四】
今天，我们一家来到珠海，又一次看到了大海。天空是那么的明朗，空气是那么的清新，大海是那么的宽广。我既感到新奇，又感到愉快。
蓝蓝的天空中飘着朵朵白云，金色的阳光把海水划出了闪闪发亮的波光，成群的海鸟在海面上飞来飞去；远处，渔船撑起了彩色的风帆。
我和表姐、表哥、表妹一起在沙滩上翻来翻去，就像躺在了席梦思床上一样舒服。我们扑向大海，大海张开了蓝色的臂膀拥抱我们。我们又喊又叫，撩起了海水向别人洒去，就像过泼水节一样。我们玩累了，就躺在沙滩上休息。准备回家了，我在沙滩上捡了几个贝壳带回来。
大海真的太美了！
