2024云南中考英语作文【一】
今天我们的行程是大理古城、洋人街、感受了南诏古国的风韵。
大理白族自治州位于云南省西北部，这是一座千年的古城，古城的建筑为清一色的青瓦屋面，显得十分的古朴。我们的导游说：“大理的女孩叫：金花，男孩叫：阿鹏哥。”我觉得既亲切又好听。
后来，我们游览了全国重点文物保护单位，大理佛国标志一崇圣寺三塔景区，崇圣寺三塔，位于大理以北1。5公里苍山应乐峰下，背靠苍山，面临洱海，三塔由一大二小三座佛塔组成，远远望去，雄浑壮丽。
紧接着游览了位于苍山脚下，洱海之滨的蝴蝶泉，感受了五朵金花的烂漫故事。这里色彩斑斓的蝴蝶看的我都陶醉了，好多蝴蝶都停在了我们的帽子上、肩上、手背上，我赶紧一一拍下了照片。离开蝴蝶泉，我们车游洱海，洱海是一个风光明媚的高原湖泊，因为云南地处内陆，所以那里把湖称作海，洱海全长42公里，我们坐在船上看水里清澈见底，环山倒影，简直是风景如画。在洱海最南端的团山，有一座洱海公园，观赏苍山洱海景色是再好不过了。最后，我们观看了白族三道茶的歌舞表演，惟妙惟肖、精彩绝伦的演出，看的我目不转睛，而且还品尝了白族三道茶。
基本上大理的行程就在大家的不舍中结束了，下一站就是美丽无比的丽江了，值得期待哦！
2024云南中考英语作文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
2024云南中考英语作文【三】
清新的空气，美丽的山水，各族的服装，不同的语言，这是哪儿？这就是云南。
我看过波涛汹涌的大海，玩赏过波光粼粼的洞庭湖，却都比不上云南令人难忘的耳海，船慢慢开动了，向湖中心驶去，柔和的阳光照耀着湖面，凉爽的风不断地吹来，轻轻地抚摸着湖面，漂亮极了。向远处远眺，远处的群山在云雾的包裹下若隐若现，仿佛一位位穿着白纱的少女在借耳海作镜子梳妆打扮。耳海的水真静啊，静得像一面巨大的镜子，供人打扮；耳海的水真蓝啊，蓝得好像染上了颜料似的；
耳海的水真清啊，清得可以仔细地看见鱼虾在海底游动；耳海的水真亮啊，亮得像是谁在上面洒了一层碎金纸，金光闪闪。
我攀登过怪石嶙峋的黄山，游览过红叶似火的香山，却都不及云南的玉龙雪山。还在山脚下，我就已经感觉到袭人的寒气，看来要登上雪山并非是一件容易的事。玉龙雪山真壮观啊，翻滚的云海缠绕在山腰，白茫茫一片，好不壮观！玉龙雪山真高耸啊，海拔五千多米，连登山队也没将它制服，玉龙雪山真秀丽啊，灰白色的石头与翠绿的树木形成了完美搭配，再加上云雾迷蒙，显得更加美丽、迷人。
这样的山围绕着这样的水，这样的水倒映着这样的山，还有空中云雾缠绕，山间绿树翠草，海上游船小舟，真是“人在云南游，犹如画中走。”
2024云南中考英语作文【四】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
