导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
南昌的夏天真热啊!我们每天都呆在空调房间里不敢出去,真是郁闷。有天傍晚,舅舅突然对我说,如果我能在7点钟前完成地理作业,他就带我去秋水广场看音乐喷泉。我一听高兴极了,赶在7点前做完了作业。
秋水广场离舅舅家有点远,我们打了个的士过去。
今晚喷泉的第一曲音乐是《走向新时代》。泉水像一群刚刚出浴的仙女,随着优美的旋律翩翩起舞,那可真是壮观啊!到了歌声的最高潮,只见一个高高的水柱直扑云霄,就像孙悟空变长的金箍棒一样。水柱保持了数十秒才猛地跌下,溅起的`水花竟有数米高。我们朝喷泉拍了很多照片,然后骑一辆可以坐4个人的单车在附近溜达。后来,我们发现一个可以看喷泉的好位置,只是会打湿衣服——泉水像淘气的小孩,时不时地跳到我们身上来。很多游客的衣服都被打湿了,可是没有一个人退却,似乎都在享受泉水带来的清凉。在《青藏高原》那一曲时,泉水随着激昂的音乐蹦到了最高点,大概有三十层楼那么高。水柱上投映着彩色的灯光,仿佛一排排巨大的荧光棒,非常壮观。
看完音乐喷泉,我们骑车去了秋水广场南边。那里有一个“赣文化长廊”。舅舅问我:“赣是什么意思,你知道吗?”我立即回答:“赣是江西的意思,前几天在地理书上学过。”这条沿江长廊长3000米,以雕塑、浮雕、石刻、壁画、小巧园林与建筑为主,将数千年丰富多彩的赣文化呈现在人们眼前。长廊上有许多历代江西名人的塑像与文字介绍,最著名的是晋代田园诗人陶渊明,唐宋八大家中的王安石、欧阳修、曾巩,宋代著名诗人杨万里、黄庭坚,儒家理学先贤朱熹、陆九渊。舅舅告诉我这些人都是古代的文化名人,朱熹、陆九渊还到我们湖南讲过学。在赣文化长廊里,还可看到有关江西古代诗书文化、学院文化、宗教文化、市井文化等多方面的故事和传说,如“鉴真东渡”、 “滕阁妙文”等。此外,一组组真人大小、惟妙惟肖的铜雕,再现了那过去岁月里最具代表性的一些手艺人和生活场景:挑担剃头师傅正在给理完发的人掏耳屎;打箍匠正在为木盆紧铁箍;一群孩子围着一个老人用鸡毛、牙膏皮等换糖吃;在井边提水的老伯和用搓衣板洗衣服的少妇;一群正在打陀螺、踢毽子、滚铁环的孩子……
我觉得这次游玩很愉快,而且收获真不少。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
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