鞍山2016英语中考作文【一】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
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第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
鞍山2016英语中考作文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
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The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
鞍山2016英语中考作文【三】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
鞍山2016英语中考作文【四】
首先，要知道什么是扶贫。它是由党员担任的，为贫困村庄提供经营计划，提高当地人们的生活水平和质量的.一种职务。了解了这些作为基础，再让我讲述下面的故事：
星期一晚，爸爸在已经去过村里数次后正式邀请我去游玩，因为那里的自然环境好，群山包围，且有马鞍山抗日遗址。
周二，激动的我四点半就醒了，五点钟我们就踏上了去村里的路，路程55公里，但一路上我依然抑制不住我激动荡漾的心。
一个半小时后，我们已经身处空气清新迷人的小口头村中，看过爸爸的住所和村委后，我们驱车走上了山路，奔向了马鞍山。
马鞍山，名副其实，远远看去，在群山的顶端既明显又酷似马鞍。驾车只能到达售票处，剩下的路只能步行了，远望着那陡峭的山坡，眼前仿佛闪现着日军攻打马鞍山的景象。一路上，爸爸也与我谈论了好多关于马鞍山的内容：当年，一位军官在小口头村与日军的抗战中被炸去了一条腿，于是，村民和一部分战士将他送到马鞍山上养伤，山上有一位道士，在山上修建了许多庙宇，当战士们上山时，这位道士积极配合，为他们提供住处和食物。但很快日军便攻向了这里，因为山势陡峭，又有一些守山掩体和天梯，日军久未能攻下，于是便造谣马鞍山有兵工厂，便大量派遣军队攻打。战士们先用机枪，子弹用尽后，用石头阻挡日军，但最终寡不敌众，日军攻上山来，剩余战士从悬崖上一跃而下
翻过两座大山后，我们上了马鞍山，爬过七十度的天梯（最狭窄处仅能容一人过），撞过庙中的钟，站在马鞍的一角环视四周，感受到的是一种无法用语言形容的宏伟和壮丽，太河水库上游河流还在远处静静的流着
归途中，我一直想着这些风景，并在心中默念着对革命烈士的感激。
鞍山2016英语中考作文【五】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
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第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
鞍山2016英语中考作文【六】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
