描写花园的英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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描写花园的英语作文五年级【二】
这些天我读了《秘密花园》。这本书主要讲“玛丽想找到秘密花园，在找的过程中发生了很多故事，出现了很多人物。”其中，我最喜欢主人公玛丽。
玛丽在我心中是一个知错就改，坚强好学的女孩。
有一次玛丽在跳绳，她一次又一次的摔伤，但她不顾疼痛，站起来。跑去请教玛沙。最终学会了跳绳。
玛丽以前很自私，但她明白要改掉坏毛病。在玛丽6岁时，一次在爷爷家吃饭，玛丽很喜欢吃鸡腿，就把盘子里的鸡腿全吃完了，玛丽这时想起爷爷，就亲手炒了一盘鸡腿给爷爷吃。
看到玛丽就想到自我。
记得学习踢毽子的时候，我回家练习觉得脚痛就不踢了，我想如果我能像玛丽一样坚强，今日我就是踢毽子高手了。
那次，我上课时，教师提醒我把笔套套好，但我没有行动，此刻我丢了笔套，钢笔在哭泣，我真后悔。我以后必须知错就改。
读了《秘密花园》我的收获可真多，以后我必须要向玛丽学习。我发现书能使我改正错误，使我越来越优秀。
描写花园的英语作文五年级【三】
自从巨人把花园的围墙拆掉后，花园像被施了魔法一样，又是一副百花盛开、绿树成荫的景象。
春天，小草从泥土里探出了头，花儿露出了笑脸。小朋友们纷纷跑巨人的花园里，孩子们有的在草地上打滚，有的在巨人庞大的身体上玩起了捉迷藏游戏。巨人的花园里到处都欢声笑语。
夏天，火辣辣的太阳照耀在孩子们的头顶上，但是，在巨人的花园里依然有丝丝的凉爽，绿树成荫。孩子们坐在大树旁边乘凉，巨人从屋子里端出饮料和水果，和孩子们一起分享。
秋天，树上的叶子换了一件金黄色的衣衫。孩子们捡了一片片金黄色的各种各样的叶子做标本，可好看了！
转眼间冬天到了，孩子们都穿上了厚厚的棉袄，和巨人一起打雪仗，一起扔雪球，玩的可开心啦！
从此以后，巨人和孩子们一起快快乐乐地生活着。
