五年级英语作文正在进行时【一】
每个人都会有一个属于自己的“上帝”。这位“上帝”，会给你意想不到的惊喜。
早晨起来，我翻了翻日历：嗯，今天是我的生日啊，不知爸妈会有什么生日礼物呢?
我怀着满满的好奇心走出房门，想象着爸妈给我惊喜的模样。谁知道，走出房门，却是冷淡一片。我如常的跟家人说“早安”，想获得一句“生日快乐!”。可是，也却只有一句“早安”。
我失落起来，冥思苦想了一上午，还是搞不明白：究竟是怎么了，他们是不记得我的生日了吗?往年，他们还给我办了个生日聚会了;今年，怎么就没有反应呢?
我十分纳闷，不开心。今年，恐怕要自己一个人吹蜡烛了。
我拖着步子回房间，郁闷的看起书来。因为，我听说分散注意力可以让自己没有那么伤心。
但是我发现我自己根本看不下书，心情变得有些暴躁。我很清楚自己已经十分失落，想打人。可是，我已经不再是一两岁的小宝宝了，不会生气就打人了。即将六年级的我只能把不开心收在心里。
就这样，我在我的房间里度过了一个下午，整个下午我都在“思考人生”，时不时还想一想晚上怎么度过。毕竟是自己的生日，总不能平平淡淡吧。
我走出房门，打算用零花钱买一个小蛋糕，插根蜡烛表示一下就好了。
在打开门的一瞬间，一个大大的拥抱温暖着我。不需抬头，我已经知道，拥抱我的是我的老妈。“怎么样，惊不惊喜。生日快乐啊!”老妈使劲的抱住我。不难发现，以前是我依在老妈怀里的';现在，是我抱着老妈了。
“天哪，我还以为你们忘记了我的生日了。”我看着眼前的一切，惊讶的叫道：一个诺大的蛋糕摆在台面上，还有几个盒子放在一旁。“哪会不记得啊，今年搞个新花样，给你个惊喜。”老妈看着我惊讶的眼神，不禁笑了起来。
当你感到伤心时，可能是“上帝”正在给你创造惊喜而拿走了你一点点的开心。下一秒，“上帝”的惊喜就会送到你的身边。
五年级英语作文正在进行时【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文正在进行时【三】
说起书法啊，真不好意思，要知道我可为了写字大伤脑筋呢！
我嘴上虽说能练好，可心里却一个劲儿嘀咕。
以前的时候，有一次，试卷一发下来，我便傻了眼，明明是对的`却给我扣了分！我忍不住抗议：“老师，您改错了！”同桌闻声凑过来看了看我的试卷，不由皱起眉头说：“哎哟，你这是什么字啊！别说老师了，就连我也看不懂。”从那以后，我便狠下心来练字。
“横平，竖直……”妈妈远远地看见我在练字，笑意浮上眼角。但她走过来，看了看，眉心不禁又陷下去。我见了，一下子泄了气……真没想到，写字竟这么难！看来，我真是没戏唱了。妈妈见我那副沮丧的样子，便给我打气：“练字，不仅可使字写得漂亮，更可以陶冶性情，它不是瞬间就练好的，它来不得半点急躁。你得有耐心，从简单的笔画练起，这和做人要从小事做起一样，你要记住。”
哦，原来这写字也包含着这么大的学问，我一定要练好！
功夫不负有心人啊！我终于练成了班里首屈一指的好字！不能再说我的光辉战绩了，不然，该笑话我不谦虚了。
这练字不正和做人一样吗？无论再难的事，都要坚持下去！
