雅思作文有卷面分吗(雅思作文分数标准细则)

雅思作文有卷面分吗(雅思作文分数标准细则)

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雅思作文有卷面分吗(雅思作文分数标准细则)

雅思作文有卷面分吗【一】

时间状语和地点状语,都是你的扩句好朋友,不信我们来看:

Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(时间状语

Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名词状语

Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名词状语

即使是状语,也可以通过叠加将句子变得更加丰满。有能力的烤鸭当然可以通过状语从句定语从句等等来让句子更不一样。

雅思作文有卷面分吗【二】

2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?

3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?

4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.

7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.

雅思作文有卷面分吗【三】

故事中的亚陶是一个总怨天尤人的孩子。但自从他戴上蓝戒指后,好运不断。后来他还自作纸张地让蓝戒指操纵了他的生命。所以,他总是莫名其妙地交上好运。但最终他对这种不劳而获的生活感到了厌倦,结果抑郁而终。当他把蓝戒指的秘密说出时,后人却认为这只是一个童话,一个谎诞的故事。

这个童话表面讲述的是故事,其实暗藏人生的哲理。人活着到底为了什么?我想归根到底是为了活得更有意义与价值,为自己,为别人。为社会。而只要树立了这样的奋斗目标,就会产生无穷的动力,去为之奋斗,最终在奋斗中会获得无穷的乐趣!但是,若是不经过一番努力与奋斗的过程,就轻易品尝到成功的果实,那还会有什么意义可言呢?就像故事中的小主人公亚陶,当他靠蓝戒指带来一次又一次好运,总是轻易的品尝到最好的结果时,最终感到的就是厌倦,以致抑郁而终。由此可见,其实人人都一样,有苦才有乐,有苦才有甜。不经历大风大浪,即使见到了陆地,也不过是虚无缥缈的海市蜃楼、过眼云烟。

就像一次和家人爬泰山,从山脚至山顶,绵延几千米。登上玉皇顶时,大家早已气喘吁吁,腰酸腿疼,但当站在山顶欣赏蝴蝶、蜻蜓的翩翩起舞,享受徐徐清风带来的心旷神怡,极目远眺“一览众山小”时,我真的觉得,只有通过努力得到的结果才是最快乐的`,而这种快乐是那些索道车上去的游客永远也无法体味的。

不经一番彻骨寒,怎得梅花扑鼻香?其实人生本来就是这样,像亚陶那样只坐享其成的人不过是游戏人生;而那些不向命运屈服,努力朝着心中的目标去奋斗的人,才是真正的坚强的人,永远拥有真正快乐的人。我想,这应是读《幸运儿亚陶》带给我的最大启迪吧!

雅思作文有卷面分吗【四】

虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式:

for example,/for instance,(后加句子)

Such as/ like      (后加词组)

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。

改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。

改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思作文有卷面分吗【五】

阅读一直是我的强项,中国学生一般都是阅读很强哈,呵呵。在开始复习的前几天,我做了三套真题,分别错了9个,4个,3个,然后我就停下不做了,我想做真题主要是适应雅思考试的方式。接下来的日子,有空的话我就做做《雅思阅读真经》,但总共做了不到10篇。在最后一天做了一套真题,错了6个。考试的时候感觉还不错,但结果不是很理想,没有达到7。5的目标。

建议:1,即使是短期复习,也要尽力去适应雅思的方式,因为雅思很多是细节的题,所以要注意阅读的技巧(关于技巧,其他牛人已经说了很多了)

2,在最后复习阶段,一定要尽全力提高阅读速度(我也知道这不是说提高就提高的,但有这样的意识再加上一些对自己有帮助的方法,还是会有效果的)。我有个建议,大家在阅读的时候不要在心里默读,尽量做到一看到这个单词就反应过来它的意思,然后马上跳过;可以在复习的时候,每次做阅读的时候都这样训练。

雅思作文有卷面分吗【六】

所谓议论文,最关键之处在于论述得当。支持句应使主题句更加令人信服,令考生的想法更加鲜明的呈现在考官面前。然而,中国考生在论述时往往存在一些误区:

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