怎么批改写过的英语作文【一】
After reading "A tale of two cities" "A tale of two cities" is one of Dickenss most important representative works.The novel profoundly exposed the society contradiction before the French Revolution,intensely attacks the aristocratic social clais dissolute and cruel,and sincerely sympathizes with the depressed classes.The novel also described many magnificent scenes like the revolt people attacked Bastille and so on,which displayed peoples great strength.
The novel has portrayed many different people. Doctor Manette is honest and kind but suffers the persecution actually ， Lucie is beautiful and gentle ，Charles is graceful and noble，Lorry is upright and honest ，Sydney is semblance of indifferent, innermost feelings of warm,unconventional but also selfleand lofty，MiProis straightforward and loyal，Evremonde brothers are cruel and sinister......The complex hatred is hard to solve, the cruel revenge has made more hatreds, loves rebirth in the hell edge,but take the life as the price.
As an outstanding writer,in Dickenss work,the language skill is essential.Each kind of rhetoric technique,like the analogy,the exaggeration,the contrast,the humorous,and the taunt are handled skillfully,and the artistry of the work is also delivered the peak."A tale of two cities" has its difference with the general historical novel, its character and the main plot are all fictionalizes.With the broad real background of the French Revolution,the author take the fictional character Doctor Manettes experience as the main clue,interweaves the unjust charge, upholstery and so many techniques,causes the structure integrity and strictness,the plot winding anxious and rich of theatrical nature,it displayed the remarkable artistic skill.the style "A tale of two cities" is solemnity and melancholy,fills indignantion,but lacks the humor of the early works.
怎么批改写过的英语作文【二】
鼠王满脸困惑地说：为什么人们都这么讨厌我们呢？有的老鼠悲伤地说：因为我们做的坏事太多了，而且我们身上还有很多细菌。还有的老鼠说：我们每次都偷别人的.粮食，而不自己种。
还有我们很爱啃东西，把一些东西都啃坏了，所以人们当然不喜欢我们。一个老鼠伤心地说。接着，老鼠们又开始讨论起来
鼠王叹了一口气，说：你们有没有办法能让人们对我们好一些呢？有的老鼠说：我们要勤劳一些，不再去偷其他人的东西。还有的老鼠说：我们应该多洗澡，身上不要有细菌。
它们讨论了一整天，最后鼠忘说：我们现在就开始改变自我，一定要把‘老鼠过街，人人喊打’这句话改掉。老鼠们全部都同意了。
从此以后，老鼠们都非常爱干净，每天都洗脸﹑洗手﹑洗澡﹑刷牙它们还自己劳动，也不再偷偷摸摸。人们对它们的看法好了许多。
它们还很爱帮助别人，帮人们擦家具﹑浇花而且它们还在一年一度的动物赛跑大会上当上了动物裁判。它们也还当上了动物变化最大的冠军，老鼠们都非常开心，连鼠王也高兴起来。
现在它们那再也没有老鼠过街，人人喊打这句话了，人们也跟老鼠都成为了好朋友，老鼠们也都过得十分开心﹑快乐。
怎么批改写过的英语作文【三】
六一儿童节的那天，姐姐带我去石景山游乐场。那里人山人海，眼花缭乱。当我想玩旋转木马时，因为人太多我排了好久的`队最后便打算挤进去。可是，不料撞倒了一个小弟弟，他的妈妈看见后跑过来对我说：“你那么大的孩子，抢什么抢呀，你看都把小弟弟给撞倒了，”我理直气壮地说：“不是我撞得，”说完我便去玩旋转木马了。
虽然，我抢到了我喜欢的那匹木马，但我心里仍然不开心。因为我感觉四周有许多人在看我，他们的目光是那么的严肃，那么可怕。这时，我想：“这可怎么办？去道个谦吧！又怕被阿姨责怪，脸挂不住；不去吧，我心里像压着一块沉重的石头，非常的内疚，哎，真是难办”。玩完后，我从木马上下来，站在旁边的姐姐看出了我的心事，走过来语重心长地说：“去到个谦吧！”我连忙摇头说：“不去。”姐姐又说：“如果你知道自己错了，诚信地去给弟弟和阿姨道个谦，他们会原谅你的，这样你心里就好多了，玩起来会更开心的。阿姨不会说你的，”我还是有些犹豫，姐姐又说：“你知错就改，知道自己的不对，同时又明白了尊老爱幼这个道理，这也说明你今天没有白来。”听了这句话，我看了看姐姐，如释重负地走到阿姨面前说了一声：“阿姨对不起，”这是，阿姨那么气愤了，她面带着微笑，没有了刚才凶巴巴的样子了，摸着我的头说：“没事，知错就是好孩子，阿姨原谅你了。”
当时，我惭愧极了，我应该早一点认错或者及时把弟弟扶起来，这样就不那么被动了，没有那么尴尬了。
怎么批改写过的英语作文【四】
Father's Day
Yesterday was Father's Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn't remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I
got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.
What a wonderful surprise!
