要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
姚明叔叔:
你好!
我是你的忠实球迷,虽然我是一个女孩子,可我的爱好却跟男孩子一样,我所爱好的东西是女生碰都不碰的东西,那就是你的最爱篮球。你是我的偶像,我希望有一天可以跟你一样成为一名职业篮球手打入nba,这虽然是不可能的可这一直是我可望而不可及的。 姚明叔叔,你所在的休斯顿火箭队更加是我一直关注的队伍,你们的每场比赛我都看,不管是对76人的、湖人的、还是国王的我都看。你们赢了最高兴的是我,你们输了我会转悲愤为食量,使劲儿的吃饭。你们有一次差点五联败可在我的祷告下,你们转危为安,赢了最后一场.
在你的.篮球生涯中一定遇到过什么困难吧!我曾经练过篮球,练球是一件很苦的事。首先要扎好基本功,然后一定要多练,一天不练就生手,所谓熟能生巧吧!那一年的一次nba集训被你错过了,是因为你回来帮中国打亚洲赛了,你是多么的爱国呀!你才去国外参加nba时不会说英语用的是翻译,你为了不被别人看不起,使劲儿的学外语,现在终于可以跟外国人交流了。
今年的奥运会,你们虽然没有赢,但是你并没有怪队员们。你还哭了,你说你们太失败了,我认为不是这样的,我觉得主要是因为你们配合的不好。我为我们国家有这样的爱国者而骄傲。
XX年的奥运会是在北京举行,我们是中国人,我们应该感到骄傲才对,大家都是是龙的传人,有中国祖先的保佑,在XX年奥运会中接受着这种力量一定会取得好成绩,为中国再添一枚金光闪闪的金牌。
祝:XX年的奥运会中取得好成绩,身体健康。
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