浙江四年级英语要写作文吗【一】
8月1日，我们全家和爸爸单位的同事一起去象山南田岛旅游。
听爸爸说，南田岛是宁波的第一大岛屿，一路上我充满了好奇和向往，由于是第一次去南田岛，路上费尽周折，不知过了多少座桥，翻了多少座山，终于到达了目的地，南田岛一个小山村的美丽的沙滩上。望着无边无际的大海，我迫不及待地换上泳衣，一会儿去海里冲浪，一会儿在沙滩上走来走去，看看有没有小贝壳被海浪冲上来。我穿着救生衣浮在海面上玩，突然来了一个大浪把我冲翻了，我想用仰泳游回海滩，可又一个大浪打来，我喝了很多咸咸的海水，很不好受，幸好我很幸运，一个小浪把我冲回了岸边。我有点害怕，不敢到脚不着地的海里玩了，就在沙滩上玩沙子，找贝壳……天色暗了起来，我们就从搭好的帐篷里拿出烧烤用的工具和食品，在海边的一个小草棚里开始烧烤，烧烤的食物很丰富，我们各司其职，有的负责生火，有的串食物，有的烤食物……
沙滩上还有一群外地来的驴友也在烧烤，听说他们还要在海边的帐篷上过夜，我们玩得非常开心，一直到很晚才回宾馆休息。
海滩的景色真的不错，我希望以后学好游泳，能勇敢地在大海畅游。
浙江四年级英语要写作文吗【二】
说起我最喜欢的地方么，嗯，我想想--象山的海!
前年的暑假，爸爸带我去象山的.海边玩。我原先以为，海水都是碧蓝碧蓝的，没想到，那里的海水竟是黄乎乎的，一片混沌，我有点失望。不过，到了海边，怎能不游泳呢？我们立刻换好泳衣，向海水奔去。“扑通”“扑通”几声响，我们一个个都钻进了海水里啊!我忘记闭嘴了，咸咸的海水立刻钻进了我的小嘴巴。又咸又涩，真难受。不过除了这个，在海里游泳还是挺好玩的。在海里游泳比较轻松，因为海水的浮力比较大，而且头上是蓝蓝的天空，远处是茫茫的大海，令人心旷神怡。
游了一会儿，有点累了，我便来到岸边歇歇。海浪一排排从远处涌来，我们等着它涌到身边，就使劲向上一跳，让它过去，然后等下一排浪过来后再跳---我们把这个叫做“跳浪”，可好玩了。也有人没跳好，摔倒了，呛水了，但是大家都不介意，仍然玩得开开心心。海边最好玩的，要数沙滩了。在靠近海水，但不会被海水冲到的地方挖个大坑，再挖一条小小的通道，通到旁边的坑，渗出来的海水就会在两个坑之间流动。挖出来的沙，还可以堆个大城堡。除了这些，我们还可以做沙子浴。沙子浴是什么？就是躺在沙滩上，用潮湿的沙子，把自己盖起来，全身都埋在沙里，只露出一个头，很好玩也很舒服。据说，还有利于健康呢。象山的海边可真好玩啊，真想再去一次。你也想去吗？
浙江四年级英语要写作文吗【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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浙江四年级英语要写作文吗【四】
这个周末是开学的第一个周末，爸爸和妈妈带我去象山石浦的沙滩上玩了。经过两个多小时的车程来到目的地。一到石浦，我就闻到了一股浓浓的鱼腥味和咸咸的海水味。一艘艘大大小小的渔船停靠在岸边，红红的旗帜在空中飘扬。吃过中饭，我们到了中国渔村。里面有大大的阳光沙滩，妈妈帮我换上泳衣，在海边游玩，我喝了几口海水，原来海水是咸的，一会儿去海里冲浪，一会儿在沙滩上走来走去，还有很多的小贝壳被海水冲上来。
时间过的很快，一下子就到傍晚了，我们回到了宾馆里，第二天，爸爸和妈妈带我去象山的影视城，听说有很多的片子都在那里拍的，我也去那里做一回演员吧，时间过了很快，两天一下子就过去了，我们开车子回到了家。
