自我简介英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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自我简介英语作文五年级【二】
“风雨过后，阳光总会照耀”人生不可能一帆风顺，我们会遇到一些挫折和困难，在优秀的人身上也会遇到困难和挫折，所以我们必须克服困难和挫折。
作文是我的角之一，也是我的难点。每次我写作文，我都觉得很难。我不知道顺序，也不知道怎么写，尤其是当我写一篇关于人物的作文时。
有一次，老师布置了一个关于角色的作文。那时，我的头越来越大。我该怎么办?“我很不耐烦，想把笔记本撕成碎片。我坐在床上，敲了敲床头。”我累了，我累了。“这时，我看见一群蚂蚁在地上搬运食物。我把一支铅笔放在蚂蚁前面的路上，蚂蚁们四处走动。第二次，我用几支铅笔把它们围成一个圈。这时，一只领头的蚂蚁站在铅笔上，命令蚂蚁们出去，就像一个指挥官命令他们有秩序地出去一样。看到这一幕我很震惊：甚至像蚂蚁这样的小动物也克服了困难，并没有放弃。我们为什么要放弃?从那以后，我读了更多的书，读了更多的课外书籍，有时还在厚厚的笔记本上积累了一些好的单词和句子。当我看到一些非常好的句子时，我把它们记录下来并背诵出来。这样，经过不懈的努力，我的作文有了很大的提高，并多次受到老师的表扬。
人生的道路是坎坷的。没有人能在人生的道路上一帆风顺。因此，当你遇到困难和挫折时，不要轻易放弃。相信你自己。只有相信自己，我们才能把握明天，赢得胜利。
自我简介英语作文五年级【三】
“阳光总在风雨后”人生不可能一帆风顺，会遇到一些挫折，困难，在优秀的人也会遇到困难、挫折，所以我们要战胜困难和挫折。
作文是我的一个角，也是我的困难之处。每当我我写一篇作文的时候，都会觉得很困难，搞不清顺序，不知道如何下笔，尤其是写人物描写的作文我更是一塌糊涂。
有一次，老师布置了一项作业，使关于描写人物的作文，当时我的脑袋都要大了，心想这该怎么办啊?”我急躁地就想把本子给撕成粉身碎骨，我坐在床上直敲床头，“烦了，烦了。”
这时，我看见地上有一群蚂蚁在地上搬粮食，我把一支铅笔放在蚂蚁们前方的路，而蚂蚁就绕弯走。第二次，我把几支铅笔把他们围在一个圈圈里，这时，有一只带头的蚂蚁站在铅笔上指挥蚂蚁们出去，就像一个指挥官一样有条有理的指挥他们出去。看到这个场景我惊住了：连蚂蚁这么小小的动物都战胜了困难，都不说放弃，我们还有什么理由说放弃呢?从那以后我就多看书，多看课外书，有时还把一些好词佳句积累在一个厚厚的本子上，看到一些非常好的句子，我就并记录仪和背诵下来，就这样坚持不懈的努力之后我的作文就大大提高了，有几次还被老师表扬了。
人生的道路是坎坷的，没有人可以在人生的道路上一帆风顺，所以，在你遇到困难和挫折时，不要轻言放弃，要相信自己。只有相信自己，才能把握明天才能赢得胜利。
